All Comments on 'Laser Surgery'

Very nice, like this alot, "yellow your geist", and context, pulls up the two other colours.

"but yellow your geist

and black my intentions

all faded

to watered down gray"

was never so much fun....

interesting wording for such a topic...

very well done...zen master of pen~

bygone... bygone...bye I'm gone~

..unwrapping a gift and finding something totally unexpected. I love it! Thank you.

This is good. I like how you made something ordinary, which is used every day, and made it extraordinary with inventive phrasing.

in Sunday's New Poems Reviews

This felt like undulating energy - that make sense? lol, point is, I loved it.

as if as if...

bygones was bygones

and refilled carriages

fresh ink bleeding

could tattoo a stitch

to sew shut this rift

ever again -Loved it!!

High 5!