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by Anonymous

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by LilDarlin11/28/04

Steamy~

Very hot n staemy one here. Your imagery sizzles. The lathering..mmmmm.. Just great.. *Fans Self*~~ *grins*
More please~~

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by sack11/28/04

very vivid!

and thanks for mentioning some of my poems in your Saturday review! It is appreciated! Sack
PS- mezmerising= mesmerizing (I think!)

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by Liar11/28/04

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A very vivid description, the words come alive for me. Very good.

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by 11/29/04

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I agree.. very vivid with a rush of words.. Nice work.

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by tungtied2u11/29/04

Your poem is mentioned

in Sunday's New Poems Review.
P.S.- This item is on sale this week at the Home depot nearest you...;)

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by Du Lac11/29/04

dynamic energies..

Art..
loved the rich images here.
clouding mist
pelting rain
draining strain
As you know I like short powerful and alluring rhetoric in poems... this is an excellent example of leading the reader into the realm..
Lathering... feeling the water... pelting on ones skin.. very erotic. Thank you for the ride
Du Lac

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by WickedEve11/29/04

great title

Really good poem. :)

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by Honey12311/29/04

:) -- STEAMY

I do love the feel of water on my bare skin, the fragrant smells of soap and lotion....Mmmm...I really enjoyed this poem

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by Christina O. Leigh11/29/04

:)

Oh, hot damn!!
hOOt hOOt

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by Annora11/30/04

It's been said before...

It's another work of art from Art..

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by Daisy May12/09/04

Nice

Great images. mmm mm mm

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