I would have given this 100 except for the spelling errors.
This story reminds me of an experience I had. For over 8 years I had a white woman as my fuckslave. It started when she was 35 and I was 50. The character Judi is very very close to how my woman was.
RG, one of the elements of your story that rings accurate is that a Master can be a bit cruel sexually. He can cause pain and humiliate, yet be tender and caring outside the sexual part of the relationship. That was exactly the kind of relationship I had with my white slut. We would laugh often and hard because we had like senses of humor. I respected also that she lived in a small town where racists would have made her life troublesome, so I would take her out of town when I wanted her to show her devotion publicly.
All that said, good writing, my man!
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Rings True!
I would have given this 100 except for the spelling errors.
This story reminds me of an experience I had. For over 8 years I had a white woman as my fuckslave. It started when she was 35 and I was 50. The character Judi is very very close to how my woman was.
RG, one of the elements of your story that rings accurate is that a Master can be a bit cruel sexually. He can cause pain and humiliate, yet be tender and caring outside the sexual part of the relationship. That was exactly the kind of relationship I had with my white slut. We would laugh often and hard because we had like senses of humor. I respected also that she lived in a small town where racists would have made her life troublesome, so I would take her out of town when I wanted her to show her devotion publicly.
All that said, good writing, my man!
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