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You ruint the story when you did this.
Why?
Why did you do this?
There is a reason
My, my, my.... I'm not really going to apologize for the turns that this chapter took. I realize that there are several of you that aren't particularly pleased with this one, however, it was done for a reason. A new character is established in this chapter. Have no fear, Mark is going to return, so bare with me. The story has not ended and will continue, so as in any story, there are twists that readers may not care for, but they are the writer's liberty to put in. To all that have responded, whether positive or negative, I do appreciate all your feedback. But again, I'm not going to apologize for supposedly ruining the story. The beloved Mark will be returning, don't give up hope yet.
Hmmm
I'm afraid I'm going to have to go with the others on this one. I found this chapter disturbing. Are we supposed to believe Tracy is such a slut now that while she claims to love Mark the thought of being kidnapped and raped by four men excites her? I too am disappointed.
Inclined to agree
I haven't any choice to agree with the others in that I found this chapter very disheartening. Why do so many of the stories at this site insist on portraying women as enjoying their degradation and rape at the hands of a group of men. You mentioned that as the author it is your decision to write the story as you please but it is also our choice to not read any more of it. Initially, I was interested in this series but with this turn of events I will have to decline.
a surprising twist.....
Really brings out the dark side of Tracy. I admire your courage in doing this....shows she's not Mary Poppins and has her own fetishes and weaknesses. It will be interesting to see how you resolve the tension in Chapter 4!!
NEXT??
Okay Red - time for the next chapter - I'll be "patiently" waiting - or not! LOL
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