All Comments on 'Reborn Ch. 01'

by SciFan1968

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Has potential

Left me hanging, need a strong second chapter to keep me following, namely as to what has actually happened to him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Intriguing , Good

Intriguing premise, well-written, erotic. More soon, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hope Story is Continued

Good story and I hope author continues it. Like the previous comment says, it is an intriguing premise. I am Very interested in seeing what happens next, and eventually, the explanation for how he is Reborn.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice

Its a nice way to die. I'd love to die like that

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