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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/29/04

Very strong

Lulls you gently and then hits you hard, just like a faded love and a sad memory

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by LeBroz07/25/05

The Loss

Speaks so hauntingly
of love lost
and your thoughts
so rapidly fleeting

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by Bill Dada02/02/06

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'I want the wind to stop,
'Get back here with my warm memories' I scream into the darkness'

The wind always was insensitive.

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