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wonderful story
what a wondeful story. I could feel what Kim felt You're an excent writer I'm going to look now to see what else you've writeen. I hope it's alot! Gloria
loved it
need to be more to that story liek a second part
it stinks
this really stinks, if this is the best you can do in writing erotic stories, then I strongly recommend that you go back into writing children books, because there is nothing sexy or erotic about your story, what a waste.
What stinks is the previous comment
Who obviously has no imagination and can't write his way out of a papaer bag
Good writing!
I loved this story. You might want to proof read your stories a bit more closely, cause sometimes a word is missing which causes a hitch in the flow. Also I would have loved a part 2, at least. However, I really enjoyed this. :)
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