All Comments on 'A Morning To Remember'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
wonderful story

what a wondeful story. I could feel what Kim felt You're an excent writer I'm going to look now to see what else you've writeen. I hope it's alot! Gloria

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
loved it

need to be more to that story liek a second part

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
it stinks

this really stinks, if this is the best you can do in writing erotic stories, then I strongly recommend that you go back into writing children books, because there is nothing sexy or erotic about your story, what a waste.

Don1028Don1028over 17 years ago
What stinks is the previous comment

Who obviously has no imagination and can't write his way out of a papaer bag

3smokingguns3smokinggunsabout 8 years ago
Good writing!

I loved this story. You might want to proof read your stories a bit more closely, cause sometimes a word is missing which causes a hitch in the flow. Also I would have loved a part 2, at least. However, I really enjoyed this. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I'm late to the party and not sure you'll even read this but ignore the obvious jealousy (or perhaps pure ignorance) of one commentator and enjoy the others. It was beautiful - lyrical,soft and slow to build but then a crescendo that was firm and exciting without descending to the cheap use of cliche.

There's still some of their weekend left and though it feels a little late I can't help but rise and clap my hands and shout 'encore!'

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