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by Anonymous

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by impressive12/01/04

I can relate!

The verse is "light," but the meaning is oh-so-profound. ~Imp

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by postobitum12/01/04

Yay!

Round of applause, I loved it. Sorta like cotton candy, sweet, light and over fairly quickly but always remembered with a lick of the lips.

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by My Erotic Tale12/02/04

cartwheel's

love em
round and round...
a must in class~
several times a week...
love this poem...(*_*)

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by LeBroz01/25/07

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Through eternity with a buzz on? That'll make the time fly...

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by tazz31709/05/12

A HARD LESSON TO LEARN

and so easily forgotten, TK U MLJ LV NV

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