All Comments on 'A Special Christmas Present'

by Rumple Foreskin

Sort by:
  • 22 Comments
ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEover 19 years ago
Aw...

You romantic you...beautiful.

Evil AlpacaEvil Alpacaover 19 years ago
pretty damn romantic

I think the title of the comment says it all. Keep up the good work!

impressiveimpressiveover 19 years ago
I'm mellllllllllllllting !!!

I've exceeded my annual quota of sweet sappiness! If found unconscious, please infuse with raw smut. (Nice job, RF!) ;o)

~Imp

cookiejarcookiejarover 19 years ago
Darn it all...

You are such a romantic Rump...it was lovely. Good luck with the contest!

NamizujsNamizujsover 19 years ago
It is, but you intended it to be ...

Great, Rumple, keep it coming please

John/Namizujs

Budapest

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
good result

Its nice to read erotica when no one gets "screwed"

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Awwwwww!

You made my make-up run. That was really lovely and beautiful and sweet and any other romantic descriptive I can come up with.

Wonderfully told. Thanks, Rump.

Lou

xxx

logophilelogophileover 19 years ago
Lovely

Nice to see that someone isn't bitter this year! What a fabulous story. I enjoyed it immensely!

sacksackover 19 years ago
beautifully conceived...

and not a word too long! Bravo!

doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
I'm all teary

God, what a beautiful story Rumple Foreskin!!!!

Thank you for sharing that fantastic tale. *sigh* Now if only I could meet my very own Matt ;-)

Merry Christmas Rumple to you and your family. Best of luck with the comp hon. :kiss:

KinkyKikiKinkyKikiover 19 years ago
Nice but....

wish you could have gone into a little more detail of the sex, but it was great the way it fit into the story. What I wish more than anything though is you would have described the birth. The labor and delivery part would have been great if included. Very romantic though!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Nice but just one problem...

This lacked the obvious traces of emotion that a woman will put into the writing. Males are more matter of fact and to the point, blunt.

It sounds and feels like a man, trying to write as a woman.

You didn't cry when you wrote, this matters. I know, I write as both.

Interesting, well written, but you can do better since happen to know you have the ability.

(I AM a female...Shhhh...) Figure it out yet?

We have emailed. Lol I gave you a 5 because I like you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Well Done

A Great Story and well articulated - nice depth and character development - it didn't need rampant graphic sex to spin the touching story so you didn't yield to the temptation to do so - good show - more please!!!

Best Regards -

HuwRHuwRover 19 years ago
Great story

Great story. Well done, just right for Xmas.

Thanks.

Bridget69Bridget69over 19 years ago
Sweet Story.

Very touching and sensual without being overly graphic. It really proves that Christmas is indeed a time for miracles and joyous surprises. Well done!

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneover 19 years ago
Sweet

I was sooo rooting for her! Thanks for a happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
A great little story

and a very enjoyable read.

IwannadoitnowIwannadoitnowalmost 9 years ago
Nice!

Not the sexiest story, but a very good story, well told.

Not what I was expecting, from your name!

I'll read some more of yours.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
not bad

not bad, the only thing that may help is that should have dumped your

husband before starting a new love life. cheating is never good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
comment on comment

A bastard that beats his wife DOES give her up! She was free and clear the day he laid the hand on her in violence. It was never specified if the couple was urban/black which would be the only way beating your 'bitch' would be approved in society, so we must assume they were of indistinguishable color and character. HE LEFT HER with his violence - get it?!

Dumbassed comments should be left in the "boards" were everyone can chime in

mchinnimchinniover 7 years ago
nice

Very nice, very good story. Please write more. I specially like the line:

“A boy, around Christmas.” ... “And we’re not even Jewish.”

Nice touch. :)

roveroneroveroneabout 1 year ago

never-ever hit a child/animal/woman...if he does DTMF(Dan Savage)

and also LOVE petites...any size really but esp modest...

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous