All Comments on 'Extra Credit'

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TUCSON REDTUCSON REDover 19 years ago
GOOD START

Felt this was a good turn on.

FCGuyFCGuyover 18 years ago
Could have been better

Please slow down next time. Also do a better job of proofreading. It's "definitely". Not "defiantly"! Nice try, though.

FCGuyFCGuyover 18 years ago
Could have been better

Please slow down next time. Also do a better job of proofreading. It's "definitely". Not "defiantly"! Nice try, though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Alright

The premise is good...needs a little more at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
great potential

try slowing down & elaborating more. premise is hot, your just need a little character development & more details. like to see your next attempt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Defiantly

The story was so good until you defiantly used the word defiantly instead of definitely.

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