by bebechick
Please slow down next time. Also do a better job of proofreading. It's "definitely". Not "defiantly"! Nice try, though.
Please slow down next time. Also do a better job of proofreading. It's "definitely". Not "defiantly"! Nice try, though.
try slowing down & elaborating more. premise is hot, your just need a little character development & more details. like to see your next attempt.
The story was so good until you defiantly used the word defiantly instead of definitely.