All Comments on 'Friends Become Lovers: Alice & Shane'

This is the kind of story I like: the kind with actual, well-developed characters, and not just sexy constructs who fuck because the plot demands it. What you've got here is romantic, believable, and erotic. Excellent work!

Great writing. More like this.

Wonderful please write more

This was hot! Really hot! How about a little prostate massage action where she makes him her bitch?

Fantastic story! I love these... best one I've read in a long time!

Definitely in the top 3 literotica I’ve read!

This is the first anal story I've read and a really enjoyable one at that. I like the ups and downs between the characters and this contributes to a more intense final scene. I also enjoy the communication between Alice and Shane during their intimate moments.

For example:

"Just tell me to stop at any point if I hurt you," he whispered gently in her ear.

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"Keep going," she urged him. "Don't stop."

The care and consideration is sweet and makes for some hot sex.