All Comments on 'The Wrong Choices Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Not against bondage. This comes across as unpleasant people doing unpleasant things. Not erotica to me.

Macthegreat05Macthegreat05about 6 years agoAuthor
Erotica in a way

I understand your reaction. This kind of forced bondage is not something that everyone will like. And it is indeed a deviation from the usual bdsm erotica.

No offence meant, plus this is pure fiction. :)

There are some though, who would get turned on reading this. And for a change this story tries to present the feelings and thoughts of the female protagonist. I hope those some people like it.

Thanks for your feedback, really appreciated.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wrong choices, wrong category

Seems more non-consensual than BDSM

Macthegreat05Macthegreat05about 6 years agoAuthor

Yes, this is non consent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wrong category

If it's non-consent, then why did you put it in BDSM?

Macthegreat05Macthegreat05about 6 years agoAuthor

I will correct the category asap

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Erotica Mystery

This is turning into a bondage erotica Mystery. I am hooked to find out what happens next. I just hope in the end of 24 hrs, she kicks him in the balls.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Hot and heart wrenching

Why he is doing it? It's hard to believe a boyfriend would do such things. But still the way it is written, it is so believable. I am love with ananya and the way she thinks....

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I am an occasional writer, but a regular reader. Dedicated and devoted to anything related to Bondage - and especially Gags. Off late, I have been taking keen interest in Breathplay and Sensory deprivation too. I hope the readers like my stories.

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