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You're reviewed
This poem has been mentioned in the New Poems review thread over at the forum.
Another facet
Good writing Art.
fly fishing....
Loved the way you broke up the rhetoric.. jaggy... back forth, uncomfortable but comfortable that sense of the struggle the lure.. fly fishing in the wind..although some how I did not get the punch Art with the last line.. ???? don't know it did not hold the zest... of the rest... maybe just me.. but the rest YES! Loved it
Du Lac
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Whoa, gotta love it
"waste laced"
easily the best two words, I've seen slapped together in a while
Mind tripper
I haven't a clue to what you're talking about, but I do like the string-a-long of words you have here. Very tricky and makes you think. Nice, very nice.
ok
thinkok says it all.....as i've always said...only you :)
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