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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone12/03/04

Sometimes

I want to be...

Brutal lines
"Tucked between mattresses
a rhyme and meter by which
to measure our worth."

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by Tathagata12/03/04

your poem

has been mentioned in Fridays reviews

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by steve porter12/04/04

It left me satisfied

and chuckling.Thanx.

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by 12/04/04

Unparalleled

There is an erotic feel tucked inbetween the mattress, and I'm sure with the lines as well.

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by WickedEve12/05/04

just a thought

All poems should end with "Bring on the dancing bimbos." It would really liven up those poems about gingivitis, mange, and dutch elm disease.

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by LeBroz12/05/06

~~

Bit of a kinky feel
Between mattresses.

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by tazz31708/01/12

SMILE YOUR ON LIVE CAMERA

and dont forget 8 to the bar, TK U MLJ LV NV

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