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Shit on my shoe

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/10/06

HaHaHa

Perfect, I think we all have a wanker or two like this one in our lives. Stinky shit stuck in our shoes hahahaha love it

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by Amyfriend02/01/07

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I don't think that she is happy with him..haha

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by KOLKORE02/01/07

Yea, be nice too

I think somewhere between stanza eight and nine she shows some interest in that guy? Of course she does.. Who could she yell at so poetically if he is really gone? *****
And what’s with her calling him “cunt”? Oh, I guess that should be passing as part of the “authentic” style. Don’t get me wrong, I am for authentic - twenty four seven, but does it have to mean showing disrespect to women by women? ***** Other than that It was actually fun to read.

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