All Comments on 'Voyeuring My Sister In Law'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good Start

Your stories are good, at least have good potential, but are too short and you leave the reader hanging with the need to continue or write additional chapters which you don't seem to fulful.

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