All Comments on 'What He Wanted'

I would love to read more of your work whenever you are ready to submit it. Very well done, welcome to Literotica and many thanks for your first posting.

Five stars.

Wow, I just finished reading this and thought it was brilliant!

So descriptively written and extremely arousing, I feel very grateful to have had the opportunity to read it. I hope you write more in the future!

Thank you.

Absolutely brilliant

You had me with the tag line “silver haired dominatrix.” With one exception the mistresses I’ve visited over the years have been in the late 40’s to 60’ish age group and I’ve never been disappointed. Most of them have allowed body worship to varying degrees but none of them have given me the pleasure of feeling their lips around my penis.

As for your story it was beautifully written and so enjoyable. At the time of writing I haven’t read the other three stories you’ve written (but I will now) but Vala deserves a series of her own. Either a serial or stand alone stories. Thank you for brightening my day. 5 stars obviously. 👍