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and the way they lie together, urges me to read your poem several times. Okay, I had the urge. I read several times. Lovely sounding poem. Flows smoothly like long hairs on a leg. Really beautifully written.

a well-constructed poem. It's a delight to read, either to onseself or aloud. It's relatively simple construction belies the complex yet smooth flow. Beautifully done.

I'll just shut my mouth, except to say I like it.

...a gem

The "who what or where game" from the 60's. I'll take the WHAT question please! Thought provoking!!

Sack

I can't decide if you are weird or just pretentious.

A poem in negative space. I liked it. "Zen me again, baby! Harder! Harder!"