All Comments on 'A Memorable Night in Denver'

by mikeinnh

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Authentic

Nice story, and all the better because it's so natural, authentic, the 'voice' is so spot on, it feels as if it actually happened. Perhaps it did. W.

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
OK story

Too bad she did not return

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

You need to remove 99% of the exclamation marks. Nearly every sentence is a shout. But thank you for not giving her 36DDD tits and not giving yourself a 10" dick.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassabout 6 years ago
Amateur night...

but she fucked like a pro. Too bad she didn't return later.

Hot story.

lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

Actually quite romantic

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