I really don't read Anal stories, butt another reader convinced me that your submission on 12/08/04 was a good read. UNDERSTATED! How did you get someone(me) to enjoy an "anal" catergorized story when I usually avoid them. Even though I consider myself "Bi",(in fantacy land only) I have never considered getting it in my butt untill I read your "My Once & Future Kin" story. Your writing made their anal love making session so beautifull. Now you are forcing me to reconsider the merits of bdsm.
God, I'm afraid to read your trans sexual stories.
Many people get lucky and write a good story.
There is no luck envolved here.
You are a great writer.
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Anonymous12/10/04
Very Nicely Done!
While this isn't the most hard core story out there, it is by far one of the best. Content, grammar, and flow were exceptional!
A beautiful rendering of a submissive. The unveiling of her personality as she works with the Doctor is as skillful and arousing as a striptease, and shows that character is even sexier than physical appearance. Beautifully done.
I don't feel this story is that believable, as everything works out so absolutely perfectly for everyone involved. But, as a fantasy, it has few equals at Lit. Thanks for sharing your always interesting (at least!) ideas and well developed writing talent with Literotica!
well researched, or perhaps you have first-hand experience with a shrink. Whatever, this was a first rate sampling of erotica. I will be reading more of your material.
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I really don't read Anal stories, butt another reader convinced me that your submission on 12/08/04 was a good read. UNDERSTATED! How did you get someone(me) to enjoy an "anal" catergorized story when I usually avoid them. Even though I consider myself "Bi",(in fantacy land only) I have never considered getting it in my butt untill I read your "My Once & Future Kin" story. Your writing made their anal love making session so beautifull. Now you are forcing me to reconsider the merits of bdsm.
God, I'm afraid to read your trans sexual stories.
Many people get lucky and write a good story.
There is no luck envolved here.
You are a great writer.
Very Nicely Done!
While this isn't the most hard core story out there, it is by far one of the best. Content, grammar, and flow were exceptional!
Great Depth; Great Heat
A beautiful rendering of a submissive. The unveiling of her personality as she works with the Doctor is as skillful and arousing as a striptease, and shows that character is even sexier than physical appearance. Beautifully done.
Delightfully different.....
I don't feel this story is that believable, as everything works out so absolutely perfectly for everyone involved. But, as a fantasy, it has few equals at Lit. Thanks for sharing your always interesting (at least!) ideas and well developed writing talent with Literotica!
wonderful...
A wonderful job of storytelling. Penelope, thank you. I only wish it were longer...
awesome
INCREDIBLE!!! I absolutely loved this piece. All your work is amazing but you've really got to write some more stuff like this! I'll be watching :D
Bravo!
This story works on so many levels - I even liked the length!
You have a rare talent and I hope to enjoy more from you.
Keep 'em comin'.
Well done!
Fabulous, I loved it
Outstanding story
well researched, or perhaps you have first-hand experience with a shrink. Whatever, this was a first rate sampling of erotica. I will be reading more of your material.
perfect ending
Loved it, especially the ending!
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