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great poem
Before starting to read, I made up mind to find at least one tiny thing to dislike in it. Well, I didn't. I knew I wouldn't. But I was hoping. I know, I'm weird.
Not to worry
Don't worry, WickedEve, I make up for your blindness. There is a lot about this "poem" (?) not to like. I found a lot not to like. And really not much to like. To be nice, I suppose I should say I found some correctly spelled words. Other than that, however....
Crapola!
your poem is mentioned
in Sunday's review
Whoever said "crapola"
knows crapola about what makes a good poem! This is gorgeous and meaningful, but so delicately stated. I love it. :)
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A slick smooth read
Flavor filled words abound.
Mysteriously Beautiful
A Poetic Pearl. Exquisitely written. Beautifully crafted and filled with interesting visual images to tantalize the mind.
VENTRILOQUISTS IN LOVE
with margaritas and their offspring, TK U MLJ LV NV
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