by rimaday
Hopefully, that's just the beginning and Beth turns Andrea into a cum slut for her and her friends.
5 pages of great reading! What happened to the little silver bullet? One moment in her mouth, then?
As for the twit who could only state, ' Wrong category ', please get a life.
Great story! Loved the voyeur part played by the narrator. Different but erotic. There will be more...won't there? She arrives back home and they talk, or whatever. A deal is made and the smell and sounds of sex fill the air!!!
it was written good, but the husband was wrong to send his wife out and to not tell her what to expect and to have him watching this is just as wrong, I am not even sure if she was doing this of her own free will, and I hope it is the end but again this is just my opinion
Gave it 5 stars but somewhat reluctantly. First time I have read one of your stories. Liked the premise and the sex. Reading was interrupted as you mixed Andrea and Beth a few times. Need to be edited pre-post. Maybe daughter needs a spa day.
Now if I could find a Masseuse like that for my straight laced wife... Even with the minor grammar errors. a really good story.
Wow! I don't know if I could take watching that, just reading was too much. How come we never see videos like it? You keep writing and we'll keep enjoying.
Very hot too! You should follow this up with what happened after she turned off the cameras... Thank you for sharing this with us!
Thanks for you comments and suggestions. I will give thought to continuing the storyline. I would also like to know what comes next...
I've been reading Lit for YEARS and I don't think I've ever commented on a story before, but this was SO FUCKING HOT I had to say something. Can't wait for Part 2.
I'd love to see the daughter join them or perhaps Beth's boyfriend joins them and David ends up sucking cock and getting fucked by him.
AMAZING!! This is by far one of the hottest stories I have ever read! I'm so horny. It could be nice to have the husband come under her control also so she can do anything she wants with him. Maybe introduce them to another kinky couple under control and get the daughter involved. So many possibilities! You're a great writer and definitely know the meaning of erotica!!! Outstanding job!!
Very, very hot. I'd give it a 7 if I could. I'll definitely be reading more of your stories.
A super hot lesbian lovemaking story, wow that Beth is quite a woman but Andrea takes the cake. One of the best and hottest story I've read. I would loved to have listened to some outrageous comments from Andrea and Beth from their wonderful episodes with hopefully more to come.
you have a knack of creating wonderful situations. Very vivid, keeps me wanting more!