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My blessed youth, may you last long

I can see your point. Admittedly I confused the words a little here and what I was trying to express.

My intention was:

My beautiful blessed youth , thus long is your way - in Italian : mia bella gioventu beata, così lunga è la tua strada.

But thanks for introducing the concept of expressing wish, which is not here but I will certainly try to include in a subsequent poem as:

Mia bella gioventu beata, potresti durare a lungo.

Very well written, bravo!