Saving My Mom Ch. 03

Loved it!

Man, that was WELL DONE!
For once, a story that really flowed smoothly, both plot-wise, and language-wise. I dig through a lot of crappy writing to find the occasional gem like this! Stories written this well make all the drudgery worthwhile.
Thank you, ma'am, for doing such a good job. I truly hate wasting my time reading badly-written, badly-envisioned porn stories. Finding work like yours is like winning the lottery. PLEASE keep up the good work!

I love the way you write a sex scene

And the picture in your bio is not bad either.

Twenty One? Really......

Great stories.... you have a great imagination or a great body of experiences. Can't believe you are just twenty one.
You write like you're forty. Well done. Do more.
Man out west in cowboy country.

Your Right

It definately took you a long time to wrap the story up, but it did properly close the story. Well done. Thank You. Ronnie W.

slow then fast

wonderful story, nice slow progress but last chapter was to fast wish you had slowed the pace and added a little drama

More chapters pleasee

Jenna i really think you should add more chapters but slow down and add some feeling into your love scenes with son and mom .
Pat
Atlanta,Ga

I WOULD LIKE TO SEE MORE OF THIS

I think you got a very good storey. I would like more

well done

so well done...loving and hot at the same time.......more soonplease

I'm assuming this was a work in progress,given the multiple chapters. Otherwise this could have been one story easily enough.

Very sensual read

You built a great foundation as the story unfolded and the son went after his mom. I agree with the others, this really could have more chapters, more sex, but not so short. A couple of longer chapters would be a great accomplishment.