All Comments on 'Was It The "Wrong" Number? Ch. 01'

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Turtle1952Turtle1952over 6 years ago
Oh Boy this could be a hot one

Hey Nosebone, another very good read and I am hoping it is a lead in to a very hot sexy story where brad get s to bone his Mum as well as his new "friends"

beau6beau6over 6 years ago
Great Start

Love it.....lots of potential here. Great start.

Letsget2itLetsget2itover 6 years ago
Excellent Start

Of all the stories I've read this one has a original beginning, please keep it fresh.

RichardGRichardGover 6 years ago

I agree with the other two comments, lots of stuff can happen here.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 6 years ago

Nice start. Hoping he gets his mom involved too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Was disappointed there wasn't more action in it but definitely has the potential for great things. Nice start

mentalmanmentalmanover 6 years ago
Great start

Truly original premise, which is difficult these days! Mechanically well written, too. Looking forward to more!

redlion75redlion75over 6 years ago
Creepy

Straight creepy as fuck bragging to a stranger that you are the town slut that fucks your family as well

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Needs a second chapter

I like your story it's different and interesting keep it up good start.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More

This is interesting and well written. I'm in love, please write more.

nosebonenoseboneabout 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks to everyone that’s read this one. I submitted chapter 2 last weekend, put it hasn’t published. Hopefully soon!!! I’m having a great time writing this one.

prop69prop69about 6 years ago
AWESOME and very interesting start

Can't wait for the next chapter.

A very different story

prop69prop69about 6 years ago
Mom works at the same hospital. Will Mom join the fun?

Some interesting options.

We need more chapters

DustyDevilDustyDevilover 5 years ago
Different Is Putting It Mildly

This is starting out to be a very strange story indeed. I will have to read the further chapters before rendering further judgment.

prop69prop69almost 5 years ago
I am reading the story again. THIS IS MY FAVORITE

I wish I had a . Even a sister like her.

Even a cousin!

Wish you were adding more chapters.

petcock17petcock17almost 5 years ago
What a wrong number

I'm rereading this because I liked it all and because it was so good I kept going to the next chapter without stopping until the one with the guys.... I then did rate it and commented.... TO ME one of, if not the best titillating heart warming loving sexy story of fucking and love I've ever read.... and that's a lot.... It's an area I love to wallow in. Family love inclusive to include gay sex that most incest stories DON'T include... to bad. When I finish I will read all your stories..... I really like your stuff..... Very very good job... Wes

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
Can’t. Eli eve I never commented

On this. 5 stars. Great

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Yeah, no... Call 911 and run for your life. Or when the father pressures you, take out the blackmail approach.

1 star for just plain stupidity.

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
Awesome

I have read all 14 chapters.....BEST STORY EVER!!!!

You will be HOOKED!!!

I am rereading the entire series.

Wish it would go on forever.

SexualT69SexualT69over 2 years ago

Second time reading this, I loved it the first time. I know I'm going to love it the second

RanDog025RanDog025over 2 years ago

Very Interesting! 5 Stars

dgfergiedgfergieover 2 years ago

Writings ok, don't quite know where this going though.

Robbi_The_RobotRobbi_The_Robot3 months ago

Cool start to the story. When I was in high school, I received a phone call from a girl that was a wrong number. It was a fun and interesting call, similar one time call but she certainly didn't talk about her family. She also never called me again nor agreed to see me. Thanks for bringing back a good memory. Looking forward to reading more of the series.

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