I'd have like to have read more details of the incestuous encounter; there was so much build up to it and then.....two paragraphs. Overall the story was very well written and the build up was great. Keep up the good work!
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Anonymous12/12/04
good work, keep it up
Great build up! But a quick ending. And what, no anal! Please write some more about this mother and son and build it up to some great butt fucking!
I have to agree the story was a bit short....& no oral for the son.....I also can't recall any anal sex in previous stories by this author, but FUCK IT !.....It's STILL Parabolus ! :-)
Keep up the good work & how about a mother/son non-consent story ?
You may be the best author of mother-son incest stories on Literotica. No one I have read is a better writer or more believable. I cannot suggest a single improvement to this story; it is almost perfect.
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Anonymous12/29/05
OH WOW!
Could have had more of the real thing, but god it made me horny. I do hope there will be more.
Thats exact that what one of the answering posters said above.
I find that also.
It`s the second time i give a comment for the stories here by literotica.
Excuse my English, I`m German.
Thank`s for the story.
Claus
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Anonymous08/24/07
well done
very stimulating, very believable, please continue and keep the friend out, just mom and son.
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Anonymous09/12/07
JUST LIKE ME AN MY MOM
It's just like me and my mom we drive each other crazy with lust,were in love more now then ever,we don't share her but we love anel
A very good story - better because it didnt include any anal - please give us more of this mom/son experience but please keep the anal out of it - it just degrades the woman
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Anonymous11/08/07
good show!
very well written. believeable. written from memory? please get mom pregnant.
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Anonymous06/22/09
wanton mother incites her son to fuck her silly
This is a very interesting riff on motherfucking, which looks to be the fastest growing indoor sport in the country. The son has kept his natural motherfucking urges in check, hardly even conscious of them. But his Mom is a sensuous woman, loves to get felt up even by friendly strangers. Making her way through a crowd she's manhandled by a whole football (soccer) team and loves it! Her son's buddy Frank is clued on to this and has no qualms about treating her like the available piece of ass she is and finally even fucks her! Now her son rethinks his stupid inhibitions (oh, no, not the dread "incest' taboo!), casts them aside where they dissolve like dreams on awakening, seizes his mother and gives her--and himself--the best fuck ever! His mother will be getting her boy's big stiff dick up her twat a lot from now on!
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Anonymous10/29/09
Sloppy seconds or thirds
Dumb fuck son gets sloppy pussy after mom tries to seduce him all day. Friend takes advantage of sons stupidity and son is mildly jealous. Why do all of you so called authors make the son or brother so dumb and stupid when you know the dick always rules in these situations?
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Anonymous11/07/09
TRULY BELIEVEABLE
Thankyou , great build up and totally believeable , and all the better because there were no big cocks and NO ANAL as I think it degrades his Mom. I would love to hear more description of the very subtle seduction of her son by her legs , heels ,stocking tops, panties and how their kisses became increasingly more passionate.I liked the description of her soft yielding body and her wet pussy.Sloppy seconds from your own Mom ,OMG that is the ultimate !!Maybe he could have described the wetness of her hairy pussy and the thrill when his cock first touched her and how it felt as her slowly slid into her .Also some dialogue between them as they are fucking , but PLEASE no screaming out FUCK ME SON , FUCK YOUR SLUT MOTHER ,that is so unnecessary.Your story was erotic without crudity , which for me, made it more believeable as sex between mother and son . Thanks again , good writing and please lets have more .
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Anonymous12/31/09
smoke but no fire
the build up was great, and very exciting and then u rushed right through the sex like it was an after thought
The sex was great,but just needs more of it. More often then not SEX sells the story, you sold it just a little late. It was a good read anyway ......LAROC OF AGES
English
Much Better Than Average
And surprise, surprise, no anal, thank you, thank you, thank you
a Merry Christmas Feeling
I probably would have been upset seeing my best friend gropping my mom like that right in front of me
Not bad at all
I'd have like to have read more details of the incestuous encounter; there was so much build up to it and then.....two paragraphs. Overall the story was very well written and the build up was great. Keep up the good work!
good work, keep it up
Great build up! But a quick ending. And what, no anal! Please write some more about this mother and son and build it up to some great butt fucking!
Another Great Parabolus Story........
I have to agree the story was a bit short....& no oral for the son.....I also can't recall any anal sex in previous stories by this author, but FUCK IT !.....It's STILL Parabolus ! :-)
Keep up the good work & how about a mother/son non-consent story ?
Realistic
I enjoyed the build up. It seemed realistic enough for a top vote. xoxoxo Tami
The thunder is loud, but the rain is slight!
Good build up but the sex is too brief.
Are you implying foreplay is more important than the real stuff? I hope you'll have a sequel to mend it.
O Mother!
Yeah, maybe the sex could have been a bit longer - but what the heck, it was hot! And no anal is a bonus as far as I'm concerned!! Good work.
Lukas
So Far
Great, but I'd hope Mom to get pregnant. (For which anal is a distaction; keep it out.)
Very sexy
I agree, no anal was ok with me. I'd like seeing mom get preg also. and leave out the friend, seemed to cheapen her.
sexy mom
very hot!!!write more include moms sexy thigh length girdle with lace trim and satin split crotch getting impregnated by her son
Utterly convincing and erotic
You may be the best author of mother-son incest stories on Literotica. No one I have read is a better writer or more believable. I cannot suggest a single improvement to this story; it is almost perfect.
OH WOW!
Could have had more of the real thing, but god it made me horny. I do hope there will be more.
want more on this story
great pls continue upstaires and months later
realistic
Thats exact that what one of the answering posters said above.
I find that also.
It`s the second time i give a comment for the stories here by literotica.
Excuse my English, I`m German.
Thank`s for the story.
Claus
well done
very stimulating, very believable, please continue and keep the friend out, just mom and son.
JUST LIKE ME AN MY MOM
It's just like me and my mom we drive each other crazy with lust,were in love more now then ever,we don't share her but we love anel
what a story
A very good story - better because it didnt include any anal - please give us more of this mom/son experience but please keep the anal out of it - it just degrades the woman
good show!
very well written. believeable. written from memory? please get mom pregnant.
wanton mother incites her son to fuck her silly
This is a very interesting riff on motherfucking, which looks to be the fastest growing indoor sport in the country. The son has kept his natural motherfucking urges in check, hardly even conscious of them. But his Mom is a sensuous woman, loves to get felt up even by friendly strangers. Making her way through a crowd she's manhandled by a whole football (soccer) team and loves it! Her son's buddy Frank is clued on to this and has no qualms about treating her like the available piece of ass she is and finally even fucks her! Now her son rethinks his stupid inhibitions (oh, no, not the dread "incest' taboo!), casts them aside where they dissolve like dreams on awakening, seizes his mother and gives her--and himself--the best fuck ever! His mother will be getting her boy's big stiff dick up her twat a lot from now on!
Sloppy seconds or thirds
Dumb fuck son gets sloppy pussy after mom tries to seduce him all day. Friend takes advantage of sons stupidity and son is mildly jealous. Why do all of you so called authors make the son or brother so dumb and stupid when you know the dick always rules in these situations?
TRULY BELIEVEABLE
Thankyou , great build up and totally believeable , and all the better because there were no big cocks and NO ANAL as I think it degrades his Mom. I would love to hear more description of the very subtle seduction of her son by her legs , heels ,stocking tops, panties and how their kisses became increasingly more passionate.I liked the description of her soft yielding body and her wet pussy.Sloppy seconds from your own Mom ,OMG that is the ultimate !!Maybe he could have described the wetness of her hairy pussy and the thrill when his cock first touched her and how it felt as her slowly slid into her .Also some dialogue between them as they are fucking , but PLEASE no screaming out FUCK ME SON , FUCK YOUR SLUT MOTHER ,that is so unnecessary.Your story was erotic without crudity , which for me, made it more believeable as sex between mother and son . Thanks again , good writing and please lets have more .
smoke but no fire
the build up was great, and very exciting and then u rushed right through the sex like it was an after thought
The story was ok !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The sex was great,but just needs more of it. More often then not SEX sells the story, you sold it just a little late. It was a good read anyway ......LAROC OF AGES
loved it
very nice, thank you. too bad she didn't get them both at the same time, or at least do it in front of son.
Great Story
Loved it. Only suggestion would have been to creep upstairs and peak in on mom and Frank.
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