by flashgordon562006
"She said that she even drank from Diane as she squirted her pee right into my ( => HER ) mouth.".
I still like your stories, but I like it better when correctly written.
And maybe somewhat longer. Each chapter finishes kind of abruptly, too quickly for me. But thanks for the stimulating scenes ! Chuck.
The chapters read like narratives to a travelog: "Here I am getting fucked in the ass, then in my cunt, then in my throat at Mom's house." "Now we're watching Mom get fucked in the ass by a neighbor by the pool." Etc, etc, etc. We like being a captive audience, and (most of us) are polite and give the author rave reviews (stars) and beg for more. A few readers have nasty things to say; why are they reading the story in the first place? I'd just rather imagine my cock in Lisa' s ass .