All Comments on 'Beach Fun'

Edit this to keep the first person narrator-you use "we" but then you switch to "Huggs and he/his" when you should use "I, me". Will come off better. Maybe some additional background too so your readers can buy in to the characters more.

Both characters had names that sounded like you were writing about dogs!

Finished wine in First part but had some left in bottle later?

Telling story from your perspective, then changed as if Huggs was someone else, a bit all over the place.