by DurtyWriter
A short story, but an excellent one.
Lovely way to share the holidays.
this is the 2nd story I have read of yours and you suck as a writer, I stopped reading at half the page, from the very start you make the women whores and every swinging dick is fucking them, no build up, I won't be reading any more of your so-called stories, you are awful. One star. was a waste of time.
Lame. Basically no character construction, no story, no narrative logic. Don't quit your job to be a writer.