All Comments on 'A Christmas to Remember'

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prop69prop69over 6 years ago
What a wonderful Christmas for all

A short story, but an excellent one.

Lovely way to share the holidays.

sexymeupsexymeupalmost 5 years ago
trash

this is the 2nd story I have read of yours and you suck as a writer, I stopped reading at half the page, from the very start you make the women whores and every swinging dick is fucking them, no build up, I won't be reading any more of your so-called stories, you are awful. One star. was a waste of time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Lame. Basically no character construction, no story, no narrative logic. Don't quit your job to be a writer.

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