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Anonymous negatives are sent by the ignorant 12/14/04 by Don1028 and the
un-accomplished--These creaps should start by telling what makes them expert
Keep posting, becuase shit, such as this only further prove what a first class asshole you
are.
Face facts, being anonymous and being valid are not opposite, If anything, it is more freeing.
Also, vermin of your obvious limited intelligence are usually also unhinged mentally and
dangerous.
Do the world a favor, pussy, and fuck off.
===========================================
I like the premise of your story but it needs more content. Give more background on the characters (more information on their college affairs), their current situation (How did they set up the hotel affair?), correct the grammar, and do it all in more than one paragraph the story may turn out great.
I'm guessing English is a second language or you wrote it very quickly. There are people that can help you out and proof read if that's the case.
by
Anonymous12/15/04
The worlds full of assholes
of one type or another. Your story did what what you wanted it too. Are we going to find out about what........
by
Anonymous12/15/04
Cuckolding Husband and aUthor Sucks ?
Well Donie - we see you defend cockholding uh cuckolding sorry - sure don't mean to offend cockholding - you should really try it before writing about it tho to see how truly erotic you think it is - some would say it offends thier sensibilities - true - some would say well some sickies really like it - true - most non-sickies would say respect is difficult to give to stories and authors who pracice cuckolding but it's truly your right to be sick isn't it - hard to deny you the right to be anything you aspire to. So Donie - write on - as will the people who don't like wussie characters or authors - they don't think it's sexy or erotic - they don't respect you or the theme -so why get hot defending your preferences - your uncomfortable with their comments and they are uncomfortable or angry that a loving husband could credibly, thoughtfully and erotically(?)give his loving wife up to a bigger cock than his - suck others cum from her stretched out raw cunt that has been only his since they agreed in marriage not to fuck around - perhaps it has delivered the children he is raising as his own(?)- well arn't they woefully behind your erotic curve and plausible reason - I say if you like wussie stories and the respect they garner - go for it but relax - their only real complaint is your sickness isn't theirs - how fortunate for each of you to be happy with yourselves. Regards
You'll find, as I have, stories about cockholding bring out a cluster of really negative comments. Some people read them then flame you. Maybe in some cases the stories strike close to home.
What I found is, you'd best write for your own pleasure: any rewards via feedback, voting, and public comments have to be secondary.
tonytony3, speaking from experience (I've posted about 40 stories here)
It has sent me to date 4 nasty BUT UNSIGNED e-mails--
Each with some fancy excuse as to why he is chicken to receive my reply-----
If he were in Iraq he would be one of those cowards who behead women while well protected by their brother cowards all of whom are hiding behind masks---
Since this is not the place for this nonsense--I will quit now and declare him the winner----
by
Anonymous12/16/04
Intelligence Display Isn't an Issue
Dear Donie,
Anonimity is what protects you, me and others from doing something really stupid isn't it. So put that away my friend.
Anyway - Ignorance isn't the real issue here - sensibilities are - writing to arouse interest and heightend sexuality is why you are here - well that and to be appreciated - or - or perhaps to create controversy, misery and mayhem for yourself though and by us. Fun for you and us maybe.
A key issue is ownership - it's yours and you defend it - thats reasonable - predictable - you understand that.
What you don't understand that most entertainable fantasy is somewhat based in normal peoples acceptance or comfort zones - could it possibly happen. Now erotisism stretches that comfort zone - the good stuff is edgy and non-predictable - but still somewhat believeable or at the tolerable limits of reality - but not depraved or oppressively demented - now exceptions to that are enjoyed by some whose sensitivities are more tolerant to pain, crudeness, and absurdity. A good word Donie, look up absurdity (= unbelieveable). Now some people eat their own excretement - absurd but shit happens and it isn't erotic/sexy or acceptable to many.
So don't be ignorant youself - understand yourself - and try to understand your audience if you wish to - or not. If not understand our discomfort for what it is - not ignorance - anger that disrespect is your element - your theme - proud Toni/Toni - that self regarded author of 39 - countem 39 - cockolding stories of absurdity has a following of more tolerant people - we had hoped better of you - oh well - how sefishly "ignorent" of us!!! Regards
My favorite part was where the wife gave the guy a blow job but didn't fuck him. Lots of people might not like that, so what does that make me?
I'll tell you what it doesn't make me. Somebody who gives a shit about that anonymous asshole whose control issues manifest themselves in a need to lecture the world about what's normal. I suspect his problems with women extend well beyond premature ejaculation.
by
Anonymous06/28/09
my favorite
my favorite part was the end. Do me another favor stop writing.
English
a waste of bandwidth
better to have sent this to someone in e-mail
Anonymous negatives are sent by the ignorant
and the un-accomplished--These creaps should start by telling what makes them expert
well written
this was well written and a goodstory if you are into cuckold stuff
No action...
No action, no points in a score.
The Superior Highly Inteligent Thinskin
Sent me the following e-mail in regards to the comment below by me
This feedback was sent by: upyours123#notaolorhotmail.com
Comments:
Anonymous negatives are sent by the ignorant 12/14/04 by Don1028 and the
un-accomplished--These creaps should start by telling what makes them expert
Keep posting, becuase shit, such as this only further prove what a first class asshole you
are.
Face facts, being anonymous and being valid are not opposite, If anything, it is more freeing.
Also, vermin of your obvious limited intelligence are usually also unhinged mentally and
dangerous.
Do the world a favor, pussy, and fuck off.
===========================================
Need I comment further??? Signed Don1028==
Who is not chicken to sign my comment
Beta Version?
I like the premise of your story but it needs more content. Give more background on the characters (more information on their college affairs), their current situation (How did they set up the hotel affair?), correct the grammar, and do it all in more than one paragraph the story may turn out great.
I'm guessing English is a second language or you wrote it very quickly. There are people that can help you out and proof read if that's the case.
The worlds full of assholes
of one type or another. Your story did what what you wanted it too. Are we going to find out about what........
Cuckolding Husband and aUthor Sucks ?
Well Donie - we see you defend cockholding uh cuckolding sorry - sure don't mean to offend cockholding - you should really try it before writing about it tho to see how truly erotic you think it is - some would say it offends thier sensibilities - true - some would say well some sickies really like it - true - most non-sickies would say respect is difficult to give to stories and authors who pracice cuckolding but it's truly your right to be sick isn't it - hard to deny you the right to be anything you aspire to. So Donie - write on - as will the people who don't like wussie characters or authors - they don't think it's sexy or erotic - they don't respect you or the theme -so why get hot defending your preferences - your uncomfortable with their comments and they are uncomfortable or angry that a loving husband could credibly, thoughtfully and erotically(?)give his loving wife up to a bigger cock than his - suck others cum from her stretched out raw cunt that has been only his since they agreed in marriage not to fuck around - perhaps it has delivered the children he is raising as his own(?)- well arn't they woefully behind your erotic curve and plausible reason - I say if you like wussie stories and the respect they garner - go for it but relax - their only real complaint is your sickness isn't theirs - how fortunate for each of you to be happy with yourselves. Regards
Write for your own pleasure
You'll find, as I have, stories about cockholding bring out a cluster of really negative comments. Some people read them then flame you. Maybe in some cases the stories strike close to home.
What I found is, you'd best write for your own pleasure: any rewards via feedback, voting, and public comments have to be secondary.
tonytony3, speaking from experience (I've posted about 40 stories here)
The Ignorant One Below loves to hide
It has sent me to date 4 nasty BUT UNSIGNED e-mails--
Each with some fancy excuse as to why he is chicken to receive my reply-----
If he were in Iraq he would be one of those cowards who behead women while well protected by their brother cowards all of whom are hiding behind masks---
Since this is not the place for this nonsense--I will quit now and declare him the winner----
Intelligence Display Isn't an Issue
Dear Donie,
Anonimity is what protects you, me and others from doing something really stupid isn't it. So put that away my friend.
Anyway - Ignorance isn't the real issue here - sensibilities are - writing to arouse interest and heightend sexuality is why you are here - well that and to be appreciated - or - or perhaps to create controversy, misery and mayhem for yourself though and by us. Fun for you and us maybe.
A key issue is ownership - it's yours and you defend it - thats reasonable - predictable - you understand that.
What you don't understand that most entertainable fantasy is somewhat based in normal peoples acceptance or comfort zones - could it possibly happen. Now erotisism stretches that comfort zone - the good stuff is edgy and non-predictable - but still somewhat believeable or at the tolerable limits of reality - but not depraved or oppressively demented - now exceptions to that are enjoyed by some whose sensitivities are more tolerant to pain, crudeness, and absurdity. A good word Donie, look up absurdity (= unbelieveable). Now some people eat their own excretement - absurd but shit happens and it isn't erotic/sexy or acceptable to many.
So don't be ignorant youself - understand yourself - and try to understand your audience if you wish to - or not. If not understand our discomfort for what it is - not ignorance - anger that disrespect is your element - your theme - proud Toni/Toni - that self regarded author of 39 - countem 39 - cockolding stories of absurdity has a following of more tolerant people - we had hoped better of you - oh well - how sefishly "ignorent" of us!!! Regards
Hang in there...
My favorite part was where the wife gave the guy a blow job but didn't fuck him. Lots of people might not like that, so what does that make me?
I'll tell you what it doesn't make me. Somebody who gives a shit about that anonymous asshole whose control issues manifest themselves in a need to lecture the world about what's normal. I suspect his problems with women extend well beyond premature ejaculation.
my favorite
my favorite part was the end. Do me another favor stop writing.
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