All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 012'

Great story so far. Can't wait for more.

Enjoying the story, well written, good pace and interesting characters with depth.

Your writing for this series is great, I can't help but feel attached to these characters and I love it. So please keep this going, thank you.

yea i love this story to, though i'm still wondering if the mandragora will soon have human like cosciousness.if it doesn't already.

This has been one of the best series I have read on this site. Please Please keep the stories coming

Another good chapter.

I have followed your story from the beginning and I don't usually talk much on here but I wanted to let you know how much it means to us to read what you have created here. I hope to read more from you in the future. Thank you so much for sharing your heart with us.

I am truly loving this story, and can't wait for the next arc to begin. You really are very talented. I was sorry to hear you are going through a rough patch. Hope things look up for you soon.

One of your (probably many) fans

Mike

Don't be a stranger- I hope to read much more of your work. g

Just keep it coming . Your stories are getting even better as you develop them .

Just keep it coming .

You have created a great storyline, so good that it's hard to wait for the

next bit to arrive.

I have never followed a story on this site as loyally as I follow yours. Thank you for this tale, its hot but there's an endearing sweet side to this that has me impatiently waiting for the next one. I look forward to reading chapter 13 next week, great job

Thank you, dear one, for sharing this tale of the odd one out who never seems to quite fit in, but truly yearns to on several levels! Many is the number of those who walk a similar lonesome path and we thank you for giving us reason to draw together here for this brief interlude and share in the wonder of your written words. Please keep the reading lamp lit and share more of your gift with us. You're an encouragement to all! May your stories be the guiding light that helps those of us, who march to the beat of a "different drummer" , find the courage one day to share our own "story".

Fair winds and following seas; bright sunny days and sparkling clear starry nights be thine, dear writerannabelle! Fare thee well!

a traffic circle with many exits going in many possible directions. And just as many coming in. Where are we going? What's waiting ahead?

It will be fun watching as he acquires knowledge and magick. Books, relics residents, friends he has yet to meet.

Lead on.

Beautiful narrative, characters, plot, everything. One of the best stories here or anywhere. Thank you.

Phil

I will admit I was a tad disappointed reading when I realized the scene was a return for the banshee. Nevertheless instead of a repeat you managed to turn this chapter into an interesting opportunity for more storyline. I wouldn't have even thought of toying with the idea of one if the girls being turned human. Is that in and of itself a metaphor? Or do we have an opening for further conflict? Will Mike's demons resurface if one of his girls goes human?

It also makes sense because last chapter was the climax. Falling action is exactly that. The climax is over and we have a quick return to a baseline.

That being said this tale was excellent. You have every element of a full novel here. There is a continuous plotline that does progress every chapter. You have dynamic and static characters. (Such rigid bitches at that society. I was honestly hoping he would fuck her into a good person.) Not to mention that while based in a fantasy realm the actions from the characters and the plotline itself is still believable. These women aren't just falling on his unreasonably engorged cock. No, there has been legitimate reason and story behind each interaction.

It is unfortunate to hear that life has been trouble for you recently. I can connect on that. Honestly I found your story in the middle of some extreme life realities myself. Your regularly appearing chapters have honestly been the only congruent thing in my life. You have touched many lives, and you have had some real good influence. I know that you have brought magic and vivaciousness to me in some of my darkest hours. As strange as it is it was the succubus chapter that was most powerful to me. I have had to save myself and someone from themselves recently. Your words helped me never give up on that. Thank you, not just for the smut, bit for pouring your soul into this.

I am so stuck on this story. I have gone back multiple times to reread from chapter 1 just to make sure I've picked up on all the different things that I may have missed. Hopefully your monsters and imagination will continue on for many many more chapters.

This was your best chapter to date. I can't wait to see more of the sunstone. I was expecting for it to absorb the energy of Cecelia's climax and become a problem. This interaction with the monsters is what makes the story so compelling.

You do have lots of threads to follow. Do you have any ideas about how many chapters you will write?

As much as the story needs to see Mike's history resolved, please don't drag it out too long. I feel like the real story is the humanization of the monsters, not the monsterization of Mike. His history is how he relates to the monsters, but it feels like resolving his issues is a side plot to the real story that is the monsters. Potentially more important is the history and character of the house itself. Is the house just a home for horny monsters or is it a horny monster itself?!

Best Wishes with IRL

Thank you for sharing your talents here. A well written story with really interesting characters. So far the biggest monster in the story is Mike's mom. And even though it was a mistake, I got a real laugh out of the following " see his huge duck sliding in and out of her glistening, wet pussy."

I can only wish I find lover with a mind like Yours

Great chapter!! Looking for to more!

I am awaiting with baited breath. Please continue with this journey and invite us along with you.

Love,

Dragonsire

Love it. Please keep the high quality of the writing, plot, and relatiinships. One of the best on Lit!

Excellent story line and great ideas. Your talent is amazing. Thanks for sharing with us all.

Who bought some drugs and realized when I got back to my park bench that I was short changed!! Your story is amazing and I neeeeeed more than 2 pages *scratches neck*. This chapter gave my the warm and fuzzies but now I need more monsters! Write when you can lovely Annabelle 😘 I will be here waiting 🤞🏻

Love your story. Cant wait for more thank you.

I'm speechless with how good this story is. You're an amazing writer and have such wonderful ideas. Be proud. Some writers I have read ruin their story with an awful ending but you did the complete opposite. I hope you're proud with your work.

Your story, breathtaking “persons” and comments have truly been worth waiting for, though the end of each chapter have left me with agonizing feeling of loss - till the next part appeared. I love every bit of it. Great work

Another great read, I can't wait to see what you have plan for all the upcoming chapters, i cheek back every week and month hopping that a new chapter has been posted, please keep it up for as long you can.

Annabelle, I have read many stories from many writers, but have I never left a comment about their work. Your story has compelled me to write this. I am totally in love with this story, about a man who was lost his place in the world and yet finds his place in this one. To find love and some peace where one would not likely find any, especially in the realm of so called monsters. Please continue this story. When I read them, I don't see monsters, just somewhere I would love to live myself. Please continue....

Lover of your stories Kcloud

The thread I am curious to see you weave is Dana the pizza girl. She is obviously into Miller and send pretty accepting. She could fit right in as the sole human love interest. Although, Beth could do that too, but Beth is quite the closet freak. I wonder if Beth's collection of dildos might be magic related.

Those two threads I think would be the most interesting to weave along with further discovered of the house.

This is my favorite story on this site.This story is simply amazing.I hope there are many more chapters and story arcs and books yet to come.Your story puts a smile on my face when a new chapter comes out.I do have a question.Is the house bigger on the inside than on the outside?I mean are there many more roomsand places yet to be discovered.Lastly Tink is awesome I simply love her character.

I will make a deal with you. You keep writing and I will read every single word. You mad skills. Thank you for sharing your talents.

As you unfold this, I keep thinking what a great series it would be as a PG version or a great movie as R version. Don’t get me wrong, I love this version, but your talent also merits a larger audience and acclaim. Thank you.

Greta story and I can wait to see whatever you have in the works for the future. Great work.

Can't wait for the next story and or the next chapter come from you

You have produced another excellent and well balanced chapter. I do look forward to the next story arc. 🌹🌹

Very rarely do I find an erotic story with such great character development and lovable characters. I can honestly say I look forward to more :)

Lots of threads to follow and tie up in the next arc. The sex scene with Cecilia was loving and hot. I’m not voting for Cecilia to become human, but I am voting for her (and some of the other monsters) to become pregnant!

Will Mike end up having sex with the Minotaur? Will he end up having sex with the Mandragora? I hope so. That could be freaky, horrific, truly strange, and unusually sexy. (I know, maybe I’m the only one wanting that.) All the monsters are female! Why? Are male monsters too violent? Did the original owner try to build ahimself a harem of horny, female monsters? There should be some reason.

Was the storm connected to the witch’s death? Again, I think the Mandragora should use the witch’s body to create some sort of Plant/Human hybrid-homunculus, if for no other reason than to have sex with Mike. That would be sexy and spooky!

Looking forward to the next story arc.

I started reading this series, out of curiosity and because of one of my kinks. However it turned into this great story. Like if this was a book I would gladly buy it.

...Too soon to make that pun...

I am always on the look out for your next update for this story. You have become one of the few people that I keep coming back to. The last one was whitesabertooth who had issues here and left but I follow her on a different forum. Please keep up the good work.

I am impressed with your story telling. I am also encouraged that your story will be novelized. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next installment.

It is a really great story. Please keep going. I am looking forward to every chapter and adventure. Thanks.

I got so caught up in reading the story, I was unable to comment previously. A truly amazing story, one I look forward to reading more of. By far your imagination and creativity shine through. Keep writing! Your story is very exciting and adventurous! My eyes stayed glued until the end.

I like the way you have brought us to this spot in the story arc. The comment about the traffic circle was quite apt, I think. From here you can spin off in multiple directions, doing short stories as well as longer tales.

For example, we might see an adventure with the pizza girl ending with no long term effect on Mike and the House. Tink orders pizza, girl comes in and has an adventure, her mind gets wiped (or not) and she gets a huge tip to cover all the other pizzas she didn't deliver during her time inside.

Or the nice realtor lady with her box full of magic dildos could become an intermittent visitor to the House with some new Monster Girl interactions. Remember when the witch came to the house, all the upstairs rooms had Something peering out in fear from the windows.

Certainly the Coven is not going away, that was the headstrong and impetuous daughter the Mandragora vanquished, not the more dangerous mother who leads the coven.

The BBC TV series, Doctor Who, which is more comedy than Sci-Fi, is not a bad comparison when someone mentioned a PG or R rated TV show or movie. As for larger on the inside, the House has already been shown to be that, with all the hidden rooms and now you see it now you don't items. Again, Doctor Who and his time machine, which has a vast interior with many rooms is outwardly the size and shape of a public phone booth. I know, *sad sigh* the current younger generation has NO idea what that was, except for seeing them in a movie.

Bottom line, great story, fascinating concept and well developed characters. I look forward to the future with you. Thanks for the ride, it was great fun!

I look forward to up coming installments, thank you so much , for your effort and love !

Thank you for writing and sharing your story here. The things that make this novella stand out for me (besides the kinky sex with supernatural creatures) are: the narrative is clean and clear; the characters are well-defined and consistent in behaviour; and the story could exist without any erotic/sexual element and still be not just a good story, but an excellent one.

Please keep writing and adding to this wonderful universe you introduced us to.

Aside from the things you listed as possible story paths. there is still the relationship with his whacked mother. And I still like the pizza girl and the realtor.

thank you so much for sharing

This is my favorite chapter by far. My heart hurts from all the love. Your work is truly a piece of art and I look forward to many more installments.

No other author I have read captures what you have here and I so look forward to enjoying and savoring more!!!!!!!!!

This is one of the few stories that have been well written from the beginning. Can't wait for the new arcs.

Very Good!!! Always a new unexpected twist. Thanks for the effort!

As a fan of manga-hon with your wonderful vision of the monster-girl genre, was so pleased to see this serious work of writing, which is thrilling, creatively done, with the unexpected delight of Tink as comic relief! You have amazed me in so many ways for which I thank you & am eagerly awaiting the literary pastries you are cooking up for we who are now quite fond of your talent!

Shorter story but a nice intermediate conclusion. Looking forward to seeing the series continued.

I started reading Chapter 1 for the steamy, freaky sex. I came back for the storyline. I am in love with HHM! Laurel K. Hamilton is one of my favorite authors and you are right up there with her. I found myself checking back every day to see if Chapter 12 was posted yet. You really have some talent, multiple talents really, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for the residents. Thank you for gifting us with chapter after chapter, please keep up the good work!

Amazing!! One of the best series on the whole site!

Continues to be an incredible story. Can't wait to see where you take us next.

Best story I have read on this site !

Keep up the great work

I have read and written a whole lot of web stories and fanfic over my years and I have to say that this series ranks near the top. You have such an extraordinary way to reveal the humanity that we all wish to embrace through beings that are not human. You make me want to dwell in that house alongside Mike. Thank you.

Once again, thank you for sharing your story with us.

Just a great story!

Well written, fantastic character development.

Wonderful setting. Looking forward to the next chapters!

This is a wonderfully worded, incredibly sexy story. This story has become one of my favorite on the site. I hope you continue to write (if a plus sized character makes it to the fold that would go astray) but it is your story and it is amazing. Thank you.

I don't often comment on stories, I do most of my reading on the phone app. But, I just wanted to encourage you to continue this series to where you see it's conclusion. I love reading stories on this site, especially series, and even more so long series. I understand there are many reasons why those series end, but too many never get any resolution.

This series grabbed me from the beginning, and a large part of that was me believing the choices the characters made, and liking the characters themselves. I truly hope to read this series, and other writing of yours, for a long time, and to see where this goes next.

Yet another great chapter. Always wanting more and waiting for the next chapter with baited breath. Well written, can't wait for the continuing saga of Mike and his monsters and to see where all the loose ends are tied.

If Cecilia turned human and had Red Hair and Green Eyes does that mean she was part if the family in Ireland?

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story and series SO much :D Ever since i found it i've been wanting more. I can't wait for more monsters and adventures with Mike and the ladies. I am curious if the succubus will ever come back, but i'm sure if she does it'll be a surprise, and a welcome one at that.

I'm thinking that with enough effort, Mike and Cecilia will figure out a way for her to be able to stay in a 'human' form for longer periods, or even let her chose when to be in it, but i'm sure time will show more with that.

I'm really looking forward to more wonderful chapters and stories to come. :D

I really hate authors who are decent writers who insist on having a life... because that just makes reading more of their stories in quantity more difficult...

Oh well, i guess I just have to make it a habit of checking to see if you've written more and hope your life flows easily so you've time to continue to show your talent...

Your writing is simply captivating. I love how you have developed the characters.

Loved your story, as I read each chapter, I wish it would never end..

In a better world, they would be making the movie..

I am very impressed with the quality of the story which pulls you in and keeps you there. Please write more!

Love how all characters from home work together and open themselves to trust and intimacy to create connection that feeds hot sex. Beautiful writing and looking forward to future chapters

Tink is one of the most adorkable characters I’ve read in a long time. Thank you very much for sharing her and all the others in this delightful (and delightfully kinky) story with us!

Oh, and moar pleez.

I absolutely cannot wait to read the next chapter! Each time I read your story I am left on the edge of my seat and I can’t stand it much longer!!!

I couldn't put this down from beginning to end. You have a great talent for writing, and you've easily made it into the small group of writers on this site who's stories I would read regardless of the content, sex or otherwise. I really hope you continue this story, and I will eagerly await the next chapter. Well done!

I can honestly say I haven't read anything as good as this series since the last episode of Missing Dragon came out... Well done to you and keep on churning out these great stories!

Just wanted to say ur my #1 writer 👏👏

As I was finishing this chapter it seemed as though you were just going to stop it there. In my head I was thinking, "Nooo! Keep going!" But fortunately - after getting even more worried while reading the beginning of the ending authors note - I read the many chapters to come and I was so relieved and happy. Thank you for writing all of this so far. It is a really amazing story and I'm glad I found it. I really hope you don't ever abandon it. I don't even want you to finish it. But I know that can never be the case and I'm dreading the day it comes the a close.

Thank you again for writing, AnonJK

Thank you for sharing this fantastic story. Much luck and happiness to you in 18!!

I’m so glad this isn’t over. I was blown away by how much I enjoyed this and read it straight through after stumbling upon it. Keep up the great work!

Thank you for the stories they are alot of fun. And I love how open ended this house is there is so much that you can play on! If played right you can get a few years out of this story line alone and I hope you do.

Loving the story so far, can't wait to see more!!!

Whoops put it all in the title lol, keep up the great work. Also pregnant monsters would be super hot.

For a newlywed, she's not having much sex. At least, by human newlywed standards. No idea how goblin newlyweds traditionally behave.

Apart from that, it's a brilliant story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm disappointed with how long it takes a new chapter to publish but overall great story.

You're a damn good writer. Hope you get a good publisher and a good editor and start making a living at it.

I’m dying to read the next chapter of this brilliant story! Why’s it taking so long??

Fucking wow. This story has been one of the best stories I've read in my whole life. I seriously have no words to describe how amazing your writing skills are.. I thank you for every second spent in writing this story and I will try to become a patron as fast as possible so I can to support you in any way possible. Please continue writing <3 Can't wait for part 13

By the way for anybody wondering chapter 13 is already out on Patreon and its with sexy as fuck Art. I really wished I became a Patron way early on to experience the story with the art.

You have an awesome way to tell a story. I can't wait to read the next chapters as they are released from you mind and on the canvas of Literotica!

Fantastic storyline! I love the way you are going with it.

I really enjoy the story. It really touches me deeply. And your last comment, at the end of chapter 12, really resonates with me. I have had my own life shit going on, since October. Including finding that the one I thought a love, only wanted to take my house, then destroy my life. And never having fit very well with the rest of society, in many ways I could have been a model for Mike. LOL I see I will have to recover my password to my literotica account, or make a new one. And check out patreon, as soon as I get a room rented out.

OeldeWolf, gmail.

Can he fuck the Minotaur? Id love to see a gay scene where the minotaur fucks mike in the ass with a MASSIVE dick

I adore this story. I adore your vibrant imagination. I look forward to more chapters.

There are some really talented authors on Literotica, every bit as enjoyable as mainstream authors with the added bonus of sexy titilation in spades. I check in with a few active ones who are very good writers, who are great at their specialties. I think this series is the most well rounded and just plain FUN of any I have had the great good fortune to run across. Annabelle's HfHM is the only one that makes me clap my hands and do a little happy dance when I see she's posted 😃

Just spent the last two day reading this story from the beginning. Couldn't stop reading it at time. I was so intrigued by it. Can't wait to read what happens next with Mike and his monster family.

The chapter was quite good. I'm a little disappointed that Sarah could not be a more useful or redemptiary character. The flashback sequence is an intresting choice. It almost seems out of place with the ghostly imagery that you made for his mother previously.

Another awesome episode!

Always love tying up loose ends, and being reminded of others. Well written but if you're going to publish further I suggest a grammatical as well as spelling clean-up. (Such as MIke, don't need the capital I.) :)))