All Comments on 'Sensitivity Training Ch. 02'

First of all, I liked the overall story. I liked that you used dialogue a fair bit. I liked that you let us into the protagonist's thoughts. I'm going to read more of your work. Based only on this series, it's pretty good writing. I hope you keep writing.

I never know what I'll get with the Non-Consent/Reluctance category. I usually hope for the Reluctance to spike by the end (kind of a NC/R +Romance blend, lol).

In this case, I was left with the sense that you rushed at the end. While I think the target was pretty well cracked, I wouldn't call him broken. Had they continued feeding him cum for the rest of the morning, had lunch while he sucked Charles off (edging him slowly, mind you), and then daisy-chained, and repeatedly fucked him into oblivion (and he'd get to do Kelly again at least once), then he would likely be broken (as in converted to bi, possibly more?).

As it is, he's had an attitude adjustment, but he's not broken. You see, until he actually enjoys himself engaging in gay sex (willing or no), the only thing they have on him is blackmail and humiliation. Don't get me wrong, that could be enough for most people, but he might really break and get vengeful/homicidal, too. You left me wondering whether there will be an active shooter on Monday.