by viewme
Atrocious grammar and nothing remotely interesting in the story line. Sorry, but it is really that bad. Try another hobby perhaps?
Total crap. To her 2 guys is a gang bang? She's as dumb as the writer! Lame.
Stargazer55
Pretty ridiculous actually - that you think any woman would respond positively to get assaulted
Bad grammar, and basically nothing happens. You skipped over the interesting part to have her run to her date and speed through the fucking in one line. Lame!!!