All Comments on 'Valentine's Day Ritual'

Sorry but the story didn't do much for me other than the bluish green eyes. I would like to see those. Seemed a bit more clinical than erotic but maybe my tastes just lean more to the erotic.

1* for this story

Consider this a rough draft of a promising storyline, give us some more details. Maybe each of the more noteworthy Valentines days get their own chapter if you don't want to write long individual stories in one sitting.

As is though, thank you for not turning this swinging/sharing story into a one sided cuck fest with an out of control woman and wuss hubby like so many other authors do.

Its not a acid in her face B.T.B story so it will not get good scores here as thats what these morons hope to read every day.Nice Story

The concept is okay but to do this on Valentine’s or your anniversary is a really bad choice of dates. 3

More like news clippings taped together

The premise gives the story great potential, but the execution was so detached and emotionless, I found it impossible to suspend my disbelief enough to enjoy this story. There was no chemistry between the two main characters. The whole “grading” angle was a bit too clinical. Bringing the friends into the act seemed too trite. Then you ended the story with “we have a lot of other stories, but I don’t have the time to tell you.”

Add a little emotion, some dialog, and a plausible and satisfying conclusion, and this could be a top-notch story. As it is, it fell a bit short.

. . . but could only last three minutes? Sounds to me like he gets a D-. (I’ll reserve the F grades for those who can’t get it up.)

You're a joke ass wipe. You wouldn't know a good story if it was shoved up your ass. Even swingerjoe who favors these type of stories says it fell short, tells you how much you know. Why don't you tell us what you liked about this story. You can't, can you?

No comment on story, didn't read it, subject matter not my cup of tea.

cuck shit.

typical trash thrown into this category. nothing new. move on.

Just as much as I hate all cuck shit stories

Great little VDay story! Keep writing!!

I guess being married to a whore is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you'll catch.