All Comments on 'My Struggles with Trupti Ch. 05'

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 6 years ago
There's a saying that we are an amalgam of our three best friends, so it's wise to designate that elevated status very carefully

The key question for this story might be how many best friends of the narrator is Trupti ? That girl gets around ( and then some ). Cliffhanger sublime . It's fun to see Malay try so hard to man up. He's a sort of Prince Darjeeling ( Limited ).Trupti literally rocking narrator's world ? I guess it's a symbol....hopefully not of subtlety index of story declining.

Full marks*****

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Unexpected!

Wow! Didnt expect a Fight Club twist! But love it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Edge of the seat!!!

Excellent writing!!! Loved it UrbanSlut!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hello

Interesting at first, sloppy and borrowed in the end. Other stories seemed much better

patilliepatillieover 4 years ago
Wow

excellent writing and is this foreshadowing of schizophrenia in the young MC? Or even the author, is that why she disappeared from Lit and her blog for 5 yrs? Well done.

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