Conjugal Gifts 4 U

Har!

Hilarious! Great ending too! I guess that job is too good to be true...

Pretty good...

Nice story.

But, it could use a little more content, maybe you didn't have to end it so early.

Great concept, though.

I knew that was too good to be true!

Breezy, very witty tale. I wish it wasn't a dream for his sake!

LOL!

good one! poor guy ... i know many a teenager who would kill to be in his dream though...

Good start, but I was never a fan...

Of dream sequence endings. Too much of a cop out. Also, I understand that you are shooting for a comical tale, but some of the characters are so overdone that it's obvious that this is going to be a over the top fairy tale. If you tone down the characters a bit to make them more believable, you would probably have a better story and maybe the dream sequence ending would be a little more surprising. Still, made me chuckle, so thanks.

Damn!

been there, done that, have the spotted sheets. 'Twas 55 years ago and I still haven't forgiven Mom for waking me! Lynn

lovely surprise ending

Nice story does not even begin describing this one

Dear writer, seldomly have i read such a clear and well writen story.
Compliments to you, especially for that smal twist at the end!

You got me!

You had me going there for a bit. Of course, I knew it was farcical, but your punch line was great. I don't understand the low score for this one. Well done, sir.

Haha!

That was quite funny :D