All Comments on 'Long Trip to the Cabin'

When accidents turn to opportunity, great stories are born. This was both innocent and wicked in the best of ways. Well done and yes, a sequel, though not necessary, would be appreciated. One caution, keep the future sex scenes but focus more on the maturation of two young adults as they move from childhood into the mysterious world of sensual delights.

Loved it Hope you write more

This was a great story loved all of it ... sequel may spoil it but try anyway

I loved the story please continue it , I will look forward to the next post . Thank you for such a good read .

a great story hope to read more, really enjoyed it...

Great story please continue

You cant leave us hanging

We/I need this to continue and their love to deepen

Enjoyed the story and the writing. Your story was vivid. Please consider another chapter.

Definitely need to continue......I am still shakig with sexual shudders from what I've already read.

That was the best brother/sister story I have read on here...and I have read a lot. Great buildup and the sex was so well described. Well done !!!

Yes, please write more! I have read many many stories on this board and others and find this story to be one of the hottest! There is so much potential here and you have started a new relationship with a virgin sister and brother. They have just given each other their virginity and started a new chapter in their relationship and life. Now, you can continue creating their roles, emotions, develop their sexual attitudes and see how HOT this can get. I certainly cannot wait for more, thank you.

Hot, and realistic.

I've read some real good stories here but this one was awesome. More please

Hope to be able to read the next chapter soon.o

I really liked how the dynamics between them changed - it was like something that could actually happen. VERY good story.

All brothers and sisters should experience such uninhibited love.

This story needs a sequel. Probably a couple..

This was amazing! I need more! Pretty please!

Great story line! Hope for more!

Please make Part 2 happen

A sequel,or series would be exciting and fill of possibilities!

Excellent story please sequel

Yea please do a part 2. Would love to see where this could go.

He got it right the only way is just stick it all the way up her and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

One of the best I have read

That was one hell of a good story, and as some other have said, possibly one of the best, and yes lets have a part two

Think part two should include his other sister, who is a lot older, maybe around 30 years old, and has experienced in sex, and they have a threesome

Please Please part two and three what ever it takes so good.....

Amazing. Wonderful. Terrific. Thank you!

More, please!!

Wonderful story...very erotic....need more of this !

I think that I am not alone when I say that I want - make that "NEED" - at least two or three sequels to this story! FAN-'EFFIN-TASTIC!

hope you do many more chapters...

Great story and very erotic..the timing and lead up was great too!

Reminds me of my step-sister.

Very much enjoyed this. Would love to read the next one. Btw there were some typos here and there so go back over this one and get one or more person to act as an editor to proof read it to find the faults and maybe to expand it further.

Great story, can't wait for part 2!

I never leave comments, but this was hot. Please bring us more, and let the relationship evolve. I would love to read more sexual exploration and let them grow in love. Maybe she gets pregnant?

I hope there is a sequel. This was a very nicely and captivating story. When you reach the end you keep thinking there needs to be more. What happens next? How do they respond to one another the following day, week, etc. You have taken us from being voyeurs in the car to participate in the loss of their virginity’s. Please let us follow their continued growth in sexuality.

Yes - 5*

Would LOVE to read more about these characters!

Please write another chapter or two

Oh my God,this was fucking hot!!! More please!!! Maybe have Carrie stick a tree branch deep in his ass while she sucks him off.

That was the best I have read in a long time. My favorite writer has always been Allwayswantedto.... but now.... I can hardly wait for that sequel.... I love the way you take your time and lead into it.... thank you for a very very good read.

Wonderful written - thanks a lot! And it would be great being able to read a second part.

Mutual curiosity, exploration, discovery, and satisfaction. I got the feeling they were learning as much about themselves as each other.

They have more to learn, more to share.

It's would be great if mom and dad are going to be there in the next chapter

My cock is going to burst !!! Great story

This was really good. Hope to see more exploring and experimenting between the two. Maybe even a little anal? Or Mom and Dad lending a helping hand?

Oh well, can’t wait to see what’s next.

Well written and very hot. Thanks for proofreading.

I'd definitely read a sequel.

Super hot, would love a sequel.

This is the best story I've read in a while. I can't wait to see the sequel.

It's time for Mom & Dad to a) take notice, and b) get involved!

Loved it keep it up!

Sequel and soon

What a well written story and what a wonderful tale, it was like being there.

You two have so much more to try and do. Please write another cult! What happens next? Is sister on the pill and how far will this go, could getting her pregnant come about? She could always blame it a one night stand. Do you get to take her cherry ass??????

We need more! So good!

Excellent story, and very good writing. You were able to create these characters that came across as very likeable, believable, and full of an adventurous innocence that seemed natural, not forced or contrived. I really appreciated how you built up their evolution from uncertainty to fully engaged participants in a forbidden intimacy. How it began with unintended opportunistic voyeurism and escalated with an urgency as they lay there immersed in the heavy sexual tension that had filled the room. Lying there in cover of darkness masking their arousal, as they felt one another out with their words, and the many things they may mean left hanging in the air. Well done, is all I can say. And more, if you’re feeling it. I think these two have much mored to do.

One of the best Brother and Sister story. I loved the way you started the story in the car and slowly built up to an EROTIC STORY of LOVE AND TENDERNESS.

I was not surprised that the brother was a virgin, but I was surprised that his sister was a virgin. She seemed more advanced in sex that her brother. You did a beautiful job of bringing the brother along. I only wish I had a sister like his.

I hope you continue the series.

I liked that, it flowed, not forced, for all i know it really did happen.

Be nice to read on to the next part of thier relationship

Well doe 5*

great story, i think she should forget her pills and he should knock her up

loved it

Hot story, nice build up. I’ d love a sequel. Maybe mom discovers their lovemaking and wants to get involved. She might suggest to her daughter that she shows skin and slowly seduces daddy, while in the meantime she seduces her son...,

I liked this story and though I think sequels usually fall short of the original, I would like to hear more of what happened at the cabin.

If I could make one suggestion - when I was young I never called my sister 'sister', I always used her name. I know you probably did this to keep the reader aware that the couple was brother and sister, but to me it seemed unnatural. Along the same line, some of the dialogue was a bit too formal but not enough to stop me from finishing the story.

All in all you've done a very good job and if you choose to write a sequel please link it to this one. Thank you!

Such a well crafted and wonderfully arousing story. Sequel please

I would love to read of further episodes not only of the week at the cabin but through the years as well

Love it!

Very nice. Nice build up, keep it going!

Wow! This was a really good read! Loved the storytelling. I haven't written a story in ages but I'm still an avid reader and this was amongst the best I've read recently.

Keep up the good work!

PS, that little paragraph of having seen someone in say a bikini or underwear compared to a hiked up skirt or dress was so spot on!

Yes!!! Another episode please.

PRETTY PLEASE!

when is part 2.

5 stars

Your story was well written with few, or maybe no typos. A great story can be ruined by poor grammar and typos. Please write more.

Title says it all. Hoping for a sequel

Hope you get enough comments for sequal

That was a fantastic story. One of the best I've ever read. Please do at least one more chapter

This was glorious. Wonderful pacing all the way through. The sex details were intimate and enticing. I wanted to be there!

And I am blown away by how your writing has improved since the beginning. Let's just say, you do great stuff.

Thank you.

Lots of writers use "peaking" when they mean "look at". They are wrong.

"Peaking" means reaching a height, maybe the top of a mountain or organism. Could be a feeling.

"Peeking" means looking at, maybe surreptitiously, like at your sister. It involves the eyes.

You also use the word "wanna", perfectly correctly. But it often feels out of place, like your characters speak better that that. So, I suggest you use "want to" unless you are seeking a kind of effect.

Thank you for great stories.

I got just as hard as the first time and just as horny.

You did a beautiful job of building the story and bringing the two siblings together.

I hope you continue the series.

Will they continue to develop this love?

Love the tenderness and affection between Brother and Sister.

The story has the best possible ending. It doesn't need a sequel. A sequel would truly ruin it?

Two people who love one another and share that love is amazing...

WOW. It just happens to be brother and sister.

How wonderful, as a brother, to have a sister as beautiful and loving as Carrie. You did a masterful time starting and building this story. I loved the way you let Carrie "flash" her brother and excite him.

You did a fantastic time letting their love for each other build. They always were close and they needed someone to bring that love closer.

I hope you continue with Chapter 3 and beyond.

I love the story line and look forward to more!

Sequel please

Definately need a sequel to this one. Bravo!

More, please.

Adding more to this story could only be a delight for your readers!

On my way to part Two.

Very nice... Reminded me of a storm week spent in the same bed with my older step sister. Lost my virginity that week. Nothing but find memories.

Such a thrilling story with a strong build up and wonderful use of descriptive dialogue.

Having experiences similar myself it brought many many feeling back and was an absolute delight to read, well done you for an excellent story..

In that situation, I'd think they'd be damn scared of being caught. However that wouldn't have stopped me at that age. Good story. The fact that Carrie 'accidentally' flashed her brother in the car has me suspicious. You never know what's going on in the head of your hot sister. At least I usually didn't.

So well written that I could see the emotions on Carrie's face even in a dark room. Great visual descriptions (Nice tits!). Seriously, a beautiful story and the honest, "no nonsense" dialogue between brother and sister just made it better. Truly erotic. 5*

Loved it with the following minor critique. Too much emphasis on the unrealistic darkness in the cabin. Sorry but it's not true that you literally can't see anything in a dark room. Maybe that's a fetish thing or something but personally I prefer to see what I am enjoying. Other than that great. Maybe spend a bit more time on the actual act.

This is one of my very FAVORITE STORIES. I look forward to reading Chapter 2 and the Alternate ending.

Loved Every Chapter.

This was as good or better than "MY SISTERS BET". Since I have read that one more than once that's something.

Stories like this are far and between, keep this kind of story alive.

With this kind of story, someone will start a fan club just for you.

Well written, well done.....Now for pt.2

looking forward to reading the rest

Love your story, perfect pace and amazing detail! IMHO you're a Guru!

amazing. I love how you build your stories and always leave room for more

Beautiful story. I loved it.

Thanks for your well written story! Keep up the good work!!!