What a twist at the end. Nice work, Lisa. ~Imp
That was awesome - you certainly know how to write and get the reader hot in the process!!! Can't wait for more....
What an exciting and unpredictable roller coaster ride! I suspect I'll be thinking (and squirming) about this one during my travels next week. Whew!
Lisa,you sure have a way of expressing your imaginations.
mhhhh, of course I have read all three of your Stories they are all great and left me wanting.
Lisa sure knows how to write a HOT tale! I rate this somewhere beyond boiling!! You go girl!
Our Lady of Toys...Lisa, you should design (just in time for Christmas) "Lisa's Essentials ~ Toy Kit" that no girl will leave the house without! You had me tingling in just the right places.
Hot! Hot! Hot! Oy, Lisa, you should put a warning label on this...I think I just melted! Wow. ;)
Forgive me for voting so late. I thought I did so when you first posted your story. Anyway...you are still my favorite author here, and this story just further strengthens that feeling. I feel as if you've delved right into my mind, which is quite scary to think about, and then plucked my very fantasies to write them out on paper and illustrate them for me. For that I must say thank you. I will most anxioulsy await your future toy stories.
Wow, Lisa...this was Hot! Now it does bring to my mind this question: Can nipples explode?? :)
Ordinarily, I don't read toy stories, but this one was exceptional --- a restorative for bAttered nerves and bUttered assholes.....
thought it was a very hot story, very eh.. arousing? is that the correct English word?
hope you will share more with us, in the near future!
Your three Jen stories were absolutely terrific! You certainly pressed all the right buttons for me.
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