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great
the third part was absolutely hot. I loved it
Sexy and surprising!
Great job as always, Penny. This story had a few surprises that I really liked. I think you're blossoming a bit more with each new submission.
Nice piece of work Penny
You did a good job setting up the whole scenario.
I liked how you made the main character both likable and dislikable at the same time. How you made her pride a bad part and good part of her character simultaneously.
And of course the nerd getting the girl is going to appeal to me.
Well done.
excellent
not necessarily my taste as far as the sex concerned, but very very well written. definitely kept me interested
Great story! Definitely warmer!
This is a great well writtten story! Great sex, realistic and fun! Certainly left me at er full attention!
this is your best so far!!
You are blossoming as a writer which is so cool to see! I just wanted to comment on a couple of things:
1. I don't think the parts need to be announced with such huge black letters. The same size text of the story would work, or a string of asterisks.
2. The formatting on the 1st page got botched up, with strange indenting and paragraphs. You might want to revise the story and send it again, or ask Lit. to change the structure.
such fun
it was a joy to read, good humoured, a little jokey and the right result for all, the ex getting what he deserved (a pain because he is one,) the girl getting several surprises and a lesson and the nice kind nerd (dont we relate to him!!!) the girl.
Its a good story
That's the kind of guy girls need to look for.
I loved the story. I loved the character of Bryan. He's an ethical, wonderful guy who lets his kinky side out in the bedroom, but not out in the open.
Loved it all. Need to do another one of those two.
Lovely
Love the game!
WOW
What a story and well told. THANK YOU
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