All Comments on 'Tea, Cake or Something? Ch. 01'

It might be a little tame compared to other stories on here but its very believable and gently erotic, lets have a follow up!

There's hope for me yet! LOL

Perhaps something line 1000 more words to compete this final scene?

I agree with the previous comments. The final scene should have been longer, but it was well-written on the whole and I hope you continue.

Good job, keep writing

Very erotic little story.

Superb start - wonderful characters - looking forward to seeing where this burgeoning relationship leads.

Thank you so much for what will be a joy to receive