by Darknecron
If you are going to rate me please give me feedback... i like to know what people think and how they think it could have been improved
I would prefer the characters a bit more fleshed out.
I also wouldn't mind to learn how this plays out.
Thank you for sharing the story with us
I really enjoy it. I think it was beautiful how they finally got together. The distance and the damage both had was the antagonist and these two finding a way to heal each other was really neat. Thank you for sharing
.I too am curious to see how their relationship will play out. I would like to know more of his story is as well. Overall I enjoyed the story and saw no major grammar problems.
I enjoyed your story, you are right, the online meeting is a modern thing. The story line was enjoyable. Please let us know what happens to these two.