All Comments on 'A Modern Relationship'

by Darknecron

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DarknecronDarknecronabout 6 years agoAuthor
Please give me feedback

If you are going to rate me please give me feedback... i like to know what people think and how they think it could have been improved

dani_lrlmdani_lrlmabout 6 years ago
A bit thin if you ask

I would prefer the characters a bit more fleshed out.

I also wouldn't mind to learn how this plays out.

Thank you for sharing the story with us

LBLR15LBLR15about 6 years ago
Indeed modern

I really enjoy it. I think it was beautiful how they finally got together. The distance and the damage both had was the antagonist and these two finding a way to heal each other was really neat. Thank you for sharing

dreamer3366dreamer3366about 6 years ago
More please...

.I too am curious to see how their relationship will play out. I would like to know more of his story is as well. Overall I enjoyed the story and saw no major grammar problems.

Bakpker694Bakpker694about 6 years ago
nicely done

I enjoyed your story, you are right, the online meeting is a modern thing. The story line was enjoyable. Please let us know what happens to these two.

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