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by Tathagata12/14/04

I like

the duality in your work...
I read this:
~I couldn’t take another round.
I pour in Epson salts, just a little and then a lot.
If the bell rings,
I’ll be glass.
I’ll take the fall. ~
and I'm not sure if it's hard sex that you accept or a beating you took when things went wrong..there is a sense of fatality..and yet calm in this all that really leaves it open to a few interpretations.
I like it alot though, there is a part of me, that winces.
Don't stop writing

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by WickedEve12/15/04

nice

your poem is mentioned on the new poems review thread on the literotica poetry board.

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