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Hanging In The Balance

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by Anonymous

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by Nightowl2212/20/04

Sadistic

This is a very sadistic story. May even be murder.

THAT is not erotic. Just a witness to torture.

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by sandmartin12/20/04

Clever! :)

Can’t say I agree with the above comment, I thought it was erotic. The ending leaves the reader to determine the outcome – clever! There was so much opportunity for violence that didn’t occur, but reading it I was never sure what was going to happen next. It worked for me. Good plot, lots of dark sinister atmosphere, erotic – though I wouldn’t want the rope round my neck – and make your own mind up on the ending!

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by Anonymous12/20/04

very wild

Your story was full of very erotic and naughty detail. The thought of being this helpless and having such naughty things being done to me, well got to me. This story is one of those secret desires alot of us keep hidden.

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by Anonymous12/21/04

Good stroke story but...

He should have knocker her up then let her go.

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by Anonymous04/21/05

Hung - Up or what

Great erotic story - maybe another chapter where he revisits her for more can be written. Keep writing.

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by Anonymous07/08/05

So hot!!!

This story is obviously not for everybody... I love it. So damn hot. I'll save it and re-read it many times. ;-)

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by Anonymous10/29/05

Not for everybody, indeed

This was excellent, and probably the darkest story that I have ever said that about.

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by 10/30/05

Wow

That was something, dark, creepy and downright scary. Not the kind of thing I'd like to happen to me. Thank God we live in a ranch style house..lol. Great writing though. You really pull the reader into the story, which, in this instance, I don't know if it's a good thing.

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by JohnnyMax09/03/12

Knife ?

Make up your mind. The knife cut her clothes off easily but it wasn't sharp enough to cut her inside. Doesn't make sense.

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