All Comments on 'Brother and Sister Take a Ride'
by Orangesandapples
- 35 Comments
Turtle1952about 6 years agoThis could be a very sexy journey indeed. They might even have made a baby already.
dutch513nelsabout 6 years agoThat is a really hot first story .Thank you for the great read .
prop69about 6 years agoLoved the story.
However...
No mention if either were virgins.
No mention about incest
No mention if they were in the same dorm or apartment
No mention if they dated anyone in HS
redlion75about 6 years agoNo mention of incest?did you miss the whole thing where they had sex
Orangesandapplesabout 6 years agoAuthorHey Thanks everyone. This is my first story and I had no idea what I was doing haha. I will most definitely continue the story and try my best to improve on it!
horny2doitabout 6 years agoYes, a very well written story for your first time. The plot is simple and very effective. Hopefully, they will be screwing each other a lot while together at college. Tina will have to get the birth control and then they can go at it all the time. Hopefully, his big sister will be a tiger in bed and teach him everything he needs to know. Cannot wait for more chapters, thank you!
Anonymousabout 6 years agoHe got it right the only way is just stick it up her and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy
Anonymousabout 6 years agoTo a lot of stories. I really liked the ending- unprotected sex is hot. Please give us more. The trip isn’t over and neither is their journey.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoWouldn't it have been easier and more convenient for the sister to simply pull her panties aside and have sex that way? There was no need to actually remove her panties here, and in fact it would only be harder to do that in the situation she was in. So why was it written like that? It didn't really make much sense.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoStory was quick and to the point. Hope to see more. And yeah, sister should end up pregnant from her brother...so he can claim her is his, and only his!
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI stopped reading after Emily only addressed John as being her brother. Using their names as a variation to 'sis' or 'brother' would have kept the story from feeling like it was trying too hard to remind the reader that this is an incestuous rendezvous. And while I'm on that, I've never even heard anyone call their male siblings 'brother' when addressing them, save for the occasional sarcastic/snide remark (i.e. Little brother, baby brother, etc). It just sounds unnaturally formal. The idea is 5/10, but the execution was barely a 1/5. Better luck next time.
JSipesabout 6 years agoMy Brother-in-Law has always called his little Sister (my wife), Sis. I don’t see anything sinister using it in a story. Many people also call their brother, “Bro”. Why not learn to enjoy a story without tearing it apart? And if you want to offer legitimate critique, why not put your name to it and stay away from anonymous sarcasm?
prop69about 6 years agoBoth twins are sexually active.since no worry about VIRGINITY when they screwed.
Although NOT on PILL
CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER
Dark_Stormalmost 6 years ago...but nothing I haven't read before from many other authors.
"Suburban" is the proper name of a particular vehicle and should be capitalized.
The line "...our dad had head phones but we didn't know that" is a total throwaway. The author obviously was searching for a way for them to get loud without getting caught by the parents, but dad in headphones? For one thing, it's illegal to drive while wearing headphones, not to mention stupid. And to add "...but we didn't know that" makes the statement worthless. How can the narrator talk about something he doesn't know about?
Still the story held my interest enough to see where it goes next. Hopefully somewhere unique that I haven't read about before.
beanburner69almost 6 years agopretty standard backseat story, but enjoyed it. I have read all I can fine on this type of story it never gets old I have gotten away with some stuff in the backseat but nothing like these stories. keep them coming.
Anonymousover 5 years agodo people call a fucking pussy a vagina????? you can't even see a vagina normally. the vagina CAN NOT have lips ASSHOLE!!! it's the fucking fuck tube. call a pussy a vulva or a labia. THAT would be correct. WHAT YOU SEE IS NOT!!! A VAGINA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymousover 5 years agoDude are you actually retarded? Or are you like 5 because your comment made no fucking sense
Anonymousabout 5 years agoI would have added once they reached there destination, the brother ate her pussy till the sun came up.
ROCKY70almost 5 years agoShe came all over his hand, her panties are wet. Mom a sleep ,dad with headphones on and driving,how big is this suburban,?,the sex was hot but the rest left questions. a fast read but not bad. thanks
Anonymousover 4 years ago"Are you on the pill?"
"Nope." She said looking at me with love in her eyes
How to kill a pretty hot story in 16 words.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI have an older sister who is overweight as am I , she has c cuotits that do not sag a bit and she loves to have me finger fuck her in the back seat as we drive with our parents
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoNeed more about the trip, stopping at a motel, clandestine fucking, eventual pregnancy.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI'm Jen I fuck my brother like to trade storie u can text me 8457509904 females if u can guys u can to just dont be pervs
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