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Becoming His Girl Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/19/14

Disappointed... :(

I was expecting guys to get together, disappointed...

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by buttboy6901/12/15

Part 3 was great

It was hot watching his finally humiliation in front of his ex, forced to admit he love being a slut to cock.

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by cuckoldxshit03/12/15

wow master

you are a genius sire. to combine a gay story with a cuckolding end. awesome end. the guy is a pathetic loser...just as i wanted. tx

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by Anonymous03/12/15

Ha

Everyone who is upset that the gay seduction turned straight cuckhold, you got punked. Go back and read the whole thing together. From the start it was a twisted manipulation. Jim taunted Billy about who was fucking his girl and doing it better. Other hints all the way through.

Great job, Tom-ass

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by Anonymous09/20/15

I wish A Jim would have found me when I was 18. I didn't find out until I was 48 that m2m sex was so more more exciting than sex with a woman. It didnt take me long to realize I was a bottom and loved getting fucked and sucking cocks. I still feel like I wasted 30 years of wonderful sex,but at least I discovered who I am before I died. Lol

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by Anonymous12/26/15

WTF

This chapter literally made me sick to my stomach. That skank and Jim, really. I agree with an earlier comment, I wish I hadn't read this chapter. This poor kid didn't deserved to get screwed with like this. Very, very disappointed

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by Anonymous01/02/16

Usual plot and twist

Why is it that almost all stories here involve blackmail, drugs and/ or some other evil twist? It's to the point that no matter what category you go to, the story is going to have blackmail and/ or drugs involved in the plot and seduction. I know they're just fiction and these things may happen in reality from time to time, but EVERY story? Having said that, I thought this story was very hot except for the blackmail and drugs. To make it even better you should have Wendy and Jim turn this sissy out to his parents. Having them use his little faggot ass and mouth. Making him a little sissy faggot slut for all of them. And becoming the nanny for the babies that Jim and his father fuck into Wendy. Overall this is a hot story but please, you and the other authors here, do your readers a favor and stop the overkill of blackmail and drugs in your story lines. We all know it's coming at some point and it ruins the story. Just my two cents for what it's worth.

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by mouth4u02/13/16

your story made me a woman.

After reading your story several times I was overwhelmed with wanting to feminize myself. I started fucking myself in the shower each day and eating my cum on every occasion. My wife knew I liked to suck cock before, then I later confessed how feminine I wanted to be and she is very happy and helps me to do so. I am now the wife and she the Master in our home.

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by Paddles06/28/16

Jim should have gifted wendy to the 3 men after he took elle for himself

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by Anonymous08/28/16

"...You Fuck Like a Girl"

The first time I heard this I was in college on my 3rd date with the softball team's catcher. She'd just rolled us over so she was on top, reached between us to hold my short cock just right and was pumping down hard. I opened my legs wider giving her more room and as she got my cock right under her clit she orgasmed and screamed "You're a bitch and you fuck like a girl." The 2nd time was 4 years ago - I was 37 at a convention in Vegas and the female impersonator I'd brought back to my room intending to fuck instead had me draped over the arm of the couch with his much bigger cock planted in my ass. "You know you're more of a woman than I am, you really fuck like a girl".

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by Anonymous09/21/16

I think the boy needs to thank Jim and Wendy for teaching him what he is before they left him. I also think he should have cleaned her cunt of Jims cum and cleaned Jims cock of the mix of her juices and his cum. I wish I was him.

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by Anonymous10/14/16

love the series

I wish I was that boy

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by joln32110/29/16

I hate seeing a guy like Jim win. This is what my revenge would be like.

A nice sequel as Billy realizes the positon he's actually in... Does go to the Police. Only before they can arrest Jim, those Three Businessmen, Find out about what Jim is going to do with those pics as they find out from Billy Jim's threat. As those pics would expose them too and that's not going to happen. Jim and the pictures disappear. Billy reconnects with Wendy as now she realizes that she had been "taken" as Jim has done this before and now knows what she likes... teaches Billy how to "use" her. It's all about learning what people like and putting it into practice... expirence. Juniors in High School... That's still underage. They end up married after graduation as she now desires Billy who she never really fell out of love with. And the possibilities abound.

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