Great story. I suppose it appeals to the lonely romantic in all of us. Sexy and sensual without losing it's spontaneous thrill or becoming too sentimental. Good job.
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Anonymous12/20/04
Elegant, in a naughty way
Not Your usual type of writing, Sir. But due to the season, i can see why. Everyone has to feel the "spirit" some how. Yours is a more calm, seductive, erotic type of "spirit" than Your usual writings.
This is a beautifully wrapped little gift, as sweet and sad as Christmas. The ending would have been wrenching if it had been anything but the one you wrote. (I was almost afraid to read the end. Thank you for making it a happy one.)
You change voices from one story to the next with such ease, it's as if a new aspect of you has chosen to tell its story. I don't know who to root for. Right now it's a tie between Matt Danger and this guy. Merry Christmas, Doctor M.
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Anonymous09/29/11
It warmed my heart
I loved it, yes it had a very vivid sex scene that was great. But it feels like the story is here for another reason, it might be silly, but I think so. It is a beautiful written story and it warmed my heart in times of need. Thank you for sharing it.
English
Really nice
Great story. I suppose it appeals to the lonely romantic in all of us. Sexy and sensual without losing it's spontaneous thrill or becoming too sentimental. Good job.
Elegant, in a naughty way
Not Your usual type of writing, Sir. But due to the season, i can see why. Everyone has to feel the "spirit" some how. Yours is a more calm, seductive, erotic type of "spirit" than Your usual writings.
Beautiful work, Sir.
I'm glad
I took the time to read this story. Well written and very romantic.
Luscious.
A beautiful fairy tale. Complete in every way. I'm in love with this gorgeous story you've written.
The story is like the necklace.
Ethereal, a wisp of silver and glitter.
This is a beautifully wrapped little gift, as sweet and sad as Christmas. The ending would have been wrenching if it had been anything but the one you wrote. (I was almost afraid to read the end. Thank you for making it a happy one.)
You change voices from one story to the next with such ease, it's as if a new aspect of you has chosen to tell its story. I don't know who to root for. Right now it's a tie between Matt Danger and this guy. Merry Christmas, Doctor M.
It warmed my heart
I loved it, yes it had a very vivid sex scene that was great. But it feels like the story is here for another reason, it might be silly, but I think so. It is a beautiful written story and it warmed my heart in times of need. Thank you for sharing it.
Beautiful Love Story!
Beautiful Love Story!
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