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haunting
and you've captured the " waiting room" feelings both yours and those around you, perfectly.
You have a lot of talent and a fresh way of saying things.
stick around..
Holding my breath
A second installment in a heart-wrending tale. I dare not breath for fear I will crack this brittle moment. Thanks for reminding us how many lives are affected.
You're reviewed
This poem is mentioned in the New Poems thread at the forum.
amazing.
This is by far one of the best poems I have ever read on this site. Wonderful and real. Lovely work.
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An incredibly powerful narrative read; this could be about any waiting room atmosphere, but it isn't. It's about one of those decisions only a woman can and might have to make.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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AND WHY ARE HER TEARS SHED ALONE
there had to have been a mate,that cared, TK U MLJ LV NV
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