by tungtied2u
how much I liked this one, tt.
A thought; this one seems to cry out for structural experimentation. I wonder how it would read if you played with line length and position a little.
You found a way to exprss one of lifes most precious moments. This is a gem.
You found a way to exprss one of lifes most precious moments. This is a gem.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.
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