how much I liked this one, tt.
A thought; this one seems to cry out for structural experimentation. I wonder how it would read if you played with line length and position a little.
You found a way to exprss one of lifes most precious moments. This is a gem.
This poem is mentioned in the New Poems thread at the forum.
An unusual piece best read several times to savor the play with words.
The Power of positive thinking ~ is alive and well.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.
for hope and willing. TK U MLJ LV NV
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