homeErotic PoetryKiss MePublic Comments

All Comments  for

Kiss Me

byherecomestherain©
All
Comments (2)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by fifty512/17/04

grunt, yell, sigh

In terms of metre or rhyme... I won't go there: that clearly wasn't your aim, Here.

In terms of playing with words to create a poetic impression, see the title I gave to this comment. In those terms it works brilliantly.

Eff

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by LadyJeanne12/17/04

Delicous word play

Simple and spare, and teasingly tempting. Your words draw us in for the kiss. Terrific.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Kiss Me  or
More submissions by herecomestherain.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel